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Array ( [sid] => 96177 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blurred Vision [time] => 2005-05-29 15:05:30 [hometext] => Boy meets Girl....Girl gets heart stomped on by Boy....*sigh* it must be love.... [bodytext] => Jumping stones and tossing rocks
maybe I got that backwards (maybe not)
chipping away at clay over cinder blocks
fruits of life in a melting pot....

Order in the court!! This is out of hand
one wrong thought and on trial I stand
your game is simple; you're out to reprimand
the judge let in life, but love he banned....

Trees swaying and chairs overturned
a solitary swan swimming in a lake
emotions stirred, while hearts are churned
a dog limps along with his arthritic ache....

"Take your seats!" said the judge in a booming command
a defense of insanity was quickly panned
first degree was rejected; this crime wasn't planned
the judge couldn't decide, so he ordered a remand.
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Blurred Vision

Contributed by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 03:05:30 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous



Jumping stones and tossing rocks
maybe I got that backwards (maybe not)
chipping away at clay over cinder blocks
fruits of life in a melting pot....

Order in the court!! This is out of hand
one wrong thought and on trial I stand
your game is simple; you're out to reprimand
the judge let in life, but love he banned....

Trees swaying and chairs overturned
a solitary swan swimming in a lake
emotions stirred, while hearts are churned
a dog limps along with his arthritic ache....

"Take your seats!" said the judge in a booming command
a defense of insanity was quickly panned
first degree was rejected; this crime wasn't planned
the judge couldn't decide, so he ordered a remand.




Copyright © hauntedscorp ... [ 2005-05-29 15:05:30]
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Re: Blurred Vision (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 03:47:13 PM AEST
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the emotions in this are strong and it is well thought out a great write


Re: Blurred Vision (User Rating: 1 )
by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 04:36:40 PM AEST
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Love is powerful, love is uncontrolable and love goes where ever it wants to go....it hurts and it heals...thats the power of love.

Very nice poem, good writing!

Huggss,

Nats.


Re: Blurred Vision (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 05:42:42 PM AEST
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very clever. tremendous write.


Re: Blurred Vision (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 05:49:45 PM AEST
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I love it!!! Great emotion , Great write.

Leia


Re: Blurred Vision (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 05:54:57 PM AEST
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Yeppers, sounds like love to me! Or a few I have had anyway, lol. Great write. I like the analogies you used. Unique.

Rita


Re: Blurred Vision (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 06:14:07 PM AEST
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lovely write
great job getting the point across

can the judge be swayed to change his sentance?


Re: Blurred Vision (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 10:40:18 PM AEST
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A very nice between the lines poem scorp

deep in it's meaning, could feel the tension . .

nice write . . .

Benedetto John Papa


Re: Blurred Vision (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 10:05:52 AM AEST
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A good write and it is write very clever. It was much enjoyed as always and it has a lot of emotion in it. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with all of us that read. Take care and I look forward to more. Your friend….Steve




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