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Array ( [sid] => 96160 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Notice Me [time] => 2005-05-29 11:54:15 [hometext] => this is about not feeling noticed or important by the people you care about [bodytext] => I scream
You look the other way
It's like a bad dream
That just won't go away
I fall
But you leave me there
To yell & call
You don't care
I'm slipping under
You lay me down
I feel the rain & thunder
As I lay on the ground
I die
Finally feeling free
As I start to fly
You finally notice me [comments] => 4 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 65 [informant] => living_dead_girl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

Notice Me

Contributed by living_dead_girl on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:54:15 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

I scream
You look the other way
It's like a bad dream
That just won't go away
I fall
But you leave me there
To yell & call
You don't care
I'm slipping under
You lay me down
I feel the rain & thunder
As I lay on the ground
I die
Finally feeling free
As I start to fly
You finally notice me

Copyright © living_dead_girl ... [ 2005-05-29 11:54:15]
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Re: Notice Me (User Rating: 1 )
by happynikki on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:05:40 PM AEST
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I know exactly how you feel and i'm sure others do too. This is a feeling that's really hard to get to go away because you want to be noticed but it's sooo hard to get it. I know this..and this was really really good..keep it up and hang in there. If there's just one person you're trying to get to notice you then they're probably not worth it but if it's a whole bunch of people then they're also not worth it...if no one can notice you for who you are then don't change yourself for them just stay the way you are, and everyone else is just stupid to not notice you....sorry to go on a lot..but keep up the writing!!
Much Love
~Nikki~

Re: Notice Me (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:05:54 PM AEST
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I like where you were going with this...Pretty good job. Scorp.

Re: Notice Me (User Rating: 1 )
by suicidal_imbecile on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 11:21:08 AM AEST
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yes they finally do notice you after your dead, dont they? too bad its too late
kate

Re: Notice Me (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 08:37:04 AM AEST
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its good lots of emotion in this poem its very good

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