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Array ( [sid] => 96156 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i say when were done [time] => 2005-05-29 10:24:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => what the hell is wrong with you
how can you believe her over me
this woman whos done so much to hurt
this poor little inosenct girl
that we both love so much

are you that much of a coward
that you wont stand up
for what you know is true

are you that much of a friend
that you dont even care?
what the ***** is wrong with you?

after all weve been through together
after everything weve done
you just pretend that our friendship was nothin special
well, im sorry to tell you hun
but im the one who gets to say were done

go screw your self you selfish little *****!
i was stupid to trust you to care
i was even more dumb to actually believe you
when you said, no matter what youd be there

well, as usual, ive been told another lie
cause again ive been abandond
but i dont know why

oh yeah
its cause your too scared to stick up for your self
but even worse you wont stick up for your friends!
well im sorry, hun, but im the one
who gets to say, this friendship is done!

i don't care how hard for you this has been
after all your *****in' lies
I'm telling you now you little *****
this is when my love for you dies!
this friendship has come to an end!

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato [comments] => 4 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 48 [informant] => bethers_is_my_baby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
i say when were done

Contributed by bethers_is_my_baby on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 10:24:55 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



what the hell is wrong with you
how can you believe her over me
this woman whos done so much to hurt
this poor little inosenct girl
that we both love so much

are you that much of a coward
that you wont stand up
for what you know is true

are you that much of a friend
that you dont even care?
what the ***** is wrong with you?

after all weve been through together
after everything weve done
you just pretend that our friendship was nothin special
well, im sorry to tell you hun
but im the one who gets to say were done

go screw your self you selfish little *****!
i was stupid to trust you to care
i was even more dumb to actually believe you
when you said, no matter what youd be there

well, as usual, ive been told another lie
cause again ive been abandond
but i dont know why

oh yeah
its cause your too scared to stick up for your self
but even worse you wont stick up for your friends!
well im sorry, hun, but im the one
who gets to say, this friendship is done!

i don't care how hard for you this has been
after all your *****in' lies
I'm telling you now you little *****
this is when my love for you dies!
this friendship has come to an end!

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato




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Re: i say when were done (User Rating: 1 )
by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:08:38 AM AEST
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Oi....remind me not to make you upset.....

Very strong, very powerful, very direct written.
If she doesnt get the point this way....then I dont know...rofl..

Hugsss,

Nats


Re: i say when were done (User Rating: 1 )
by Sahara on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 02:10:46 PM AEST
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Wow.... damn I agree, I wouldn't want to be on your bad side.

Very powerful write, you found a good way to vent. No doubt she'll get the point. ( ;) even me being blonde, I got the point... came across loud and clear)

Sonya


Re: i say when were done (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:58:25 AM AEST
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VERY very powerful I loved it. Hopefully she gets the point and if I were her I deffinately would! Wow. Awesome write.

--amanda--


Re: i say when were done (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 04:53:35 AM AEST
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powerful and deep stuff.. Great way to vent.. god knows everyone has too. i think your message should get across..

christina




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