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Array ( [sid] => 96155 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => cant you see what ur doin to me? [time] => 2005-05-29 10:03:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Cant you see what you're doin' to me?
its tearin' me apart
i thought you loved me
you say I'm like family
but what does that mean?
did you just say those things?
do you really just hate me?
is that that the way you feel?
please tell me now
so i can get over it
but get over it how?

i saw you as my sister
you were my best friend
but now you've betrayed me
yet my love for you wont end
i dont want to love you anymore
but i cant hate you
i know, Ive tried
you could have told me the truth
but instead you lied
now I'm stuck here
i don't know what to do
if i didn't love you so much
i would have killed you

cant you see what you're doin' to me?
what did i do to deserve it?
i thought i could trust you
but it seems Ive been deserted
i want to get over it
but you don't understand
i thought i could trust you
but alone here i stand
you didn't even acknowledge me
please tell me, what did i do?
all i ever did was love you
and you only loved yourself
now i cant help but love you
why cant i just love myself?

i needed you
but you didn't care
i needed you
but you weren't there
i still need you
this isn't fair
cant you see what you're doin' to me?

stay the **** away from me!
i don't love you anymore
what the **** did you say to me?
don't you dare slam that door!
I'm gonna get you
don't bother to run
I'm comin' to get you
you better ****in' run
no, I'm not kiddin'
this isn't just for fun
I'm gonna ****in' kill you
for all that you've done!

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato [comments] => 4 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 16 [informant] => bethers_is_my_baby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
cant you see what ur doin to me?

Contributed by bethers_is_my_baby on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 10:03:45 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



Cant you see what you're doin' to me?
its tearin' me apart
i thought you loved me
you say I'm like family
but what does that mean?
did you just say those things?
do you really just hate me?
is that that the way you feel?
please tell me now
so i can get over it
but get over it how?

i saw you as my sister
you were my best friend
but now you've betrayed me
yet my love for you wont end
i dont want to love you anymore
but i cant hate you
i know, Ive tried
you could have told me the truth
but instead you lied
now I'm stuck here
i don't know what to do
if i didn't love you so much
i would have killed you

cant you see what you're doin' to me?
what did i do to deserve it?
i thought i could trust you
but it seems Ive been deserted
i want to get over it
but you don't understand
i thought i could trust you
but alone here i stand
you didn't even acknowledge me
please tell me, what did i do?
all i ever did was love you
and you only loved yourself
now i cant help but love you
why cant i just love myself?

i needed you
but you didn't care
i needed you
but you weren't there
i still need you
this isn't fair
cant you see what you're doin' to me?

stay the **** away from me!
i don't love you anymore
what the **** did you say to me?
don't you dare slam that door!
I'm gonna get you
don't bother to run
I'm comin' to get you
you better ****in' run
no, I'm not kiddin'
this isn't just for fun
I'm gonna ****in' kill you
for all that you've done!

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato




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Re: cant you see what ur doin to me? (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:38:37 AM AEST
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They'll be banning this, just so you know. Next time try to leave out the cursing if you want people to be able to read your work....You expressed yourself well nonetheless. Scorp.


Re: cant you see what ur doin to me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:42:11 AM AEST
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lol you gotta let them whats in there heart.
if it gets deleted oh well.
i thought this write was deep .
good job


Re: cant you see what ur doin to me? (User Rating: 1 )
by mylastwords on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 07:10:59 AM AEST
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I really like this poem. It's really expressive and I can relate to it in some ways. I fell in love, and he broke my heart. I felt some of the feelings you talked about. Head up though, you will get through. Moving on is hard I know, I've had to do it many a time, but things will get better!
xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx


Re: cant you see what ur doin to me? (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 10:01:37 AM AEST
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lol I can't help but laugh at the last stanza: You Get Her! Go! I can deffinately feel your emotions here very powerful and moving write. Nicely done.

--amanda--




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