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Array ( [sid] => 96152 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => who am i? [time] => 2005-05-29 08:43:09 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I feel like i don't know myself
like everything is a lie
the same one thought repeating itself
this isn't me, but i don't know why

i do things that i later regret
by my own rules i don't even abide
i say things that are mean and cruel
but i know I'm good person inside

why cant i be the person i know i am
the person i once was?
the person that you fell in love with
who you knew that you could trust?

i don't know who i am anymore
or what i am becoming
and i don't know where to find the door
to the person i wanna be

i don't know me
you know me less
but when we try to understand
it seems we know even less

i don't understand whats happened to me
why Ive become this way
so i guess that all that i can do
is just try to live day by day


Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 61 [informant] => bethers_is_my_baby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
who am i?

Contributed by bethers_is_my_baby on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 08:43:09 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



I feel like i don't know myself
like everything is a lie
the same one thought repeating itself
this isn't me, but i don't know why

i do things that i later regret
by my own rules i don't even abide
i say things that are mean and cruel
but i know I'm good person inside

why cant i be the person i know i am
the person i once was?
the person that you fell in love with
who you knew that you could trust?

i don't know who i am anymore
or what i am becoming
and i don't know where to find the door
to the person i wanna be

i don't know me
you know me less
but when we try to understand
it seems we know even less

i don't understand whats happened to me
why Ive become this way
so i guess that all that i can do
is just try to live day by day


Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato





Copyright © bethers_is_my_baby ... [ 2005-05-29 08:43:09]
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Re: who am i? (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 10:04:27 AM AEST
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Very nice. From your poetry it looks like writing helps you vent, keep doing it, you're pretty good too.

--amanda--




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