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As your petals unfold
Flowering so boldly
By the touch of Spring
Surrounded by butterflies
Gently caressing your skin
Shine ever so bright
Like the golden rays of sun

Bloom little girl
So sweet like a daisy
In a field of wonders and hopes
Rambling roses wandering
Out into the open world
Ever so curious and fond
For the long road ahead
Grow high above ground
Like the tree of life so inviting

Bloom little girl
With love and kindness
Filling your tender heart
May the road before you
Be fullfilling and sweet
A journey ever so filled
With memories to keep
Those are me wishes
For a girl in bloom..... [comments] => 10 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 14 [informant] => xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 22 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

A Girl In Bloom

Contributed by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 03:50:03 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Bloom little girl
As your petals unfold
Flowering so boldly
By the touch of Spring
Surrounded by butterflies
Gently caressing your skin
Shine ever so bright
Like the golden rays of sun

Bloom little girl
So sweet like a daisy
In a field of wonders and hopes
Rambling roses wandering
Out into the open world
Ever so curious and fond
For the long road ahead
Grow high above ground
Like the tree of life so inviting

Bloom little girl
With love and kindness
Filling your tender heart
May the road before you
Be fullfilling and sweet
A journey ever so filled
With memories to keep
Those are me wishes
For a girl in bloom.....

Copyright © xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx ... [ 2005-05-29 03:50:03]
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Re: A Girl In Bloom (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 04:08:10 AM AEST
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good poem from a good poet I like it a lot ..keep writing coz you've got talent,,,thankes for the comment

Re: A Girl In Bloom (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 04:09:29 AM AEST
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Very beautifull write that unfolds like a rose.
huggs,
emy

Re: A Girl In Bloom (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 06:46:30 AM AEST
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really vivid and descriptive. nice write.

Re: A Girl In Bloom (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 07:24:37 AM AEST
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This was one well written piece. This poem reminds me of my earlier poems that i wrote.

I think this was great, thanks for sharing it.

Jane xxx

Re: A Girl In Bloom (User Rating: 1 )
by bethers_is_my_baby on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 07:25:34 AM AEST
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beautifull poem!!! great job!!!

Re: A Girl In Bloom (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:31:28 AM AEST
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Aww Nats! What a sweet write. Lucky for her, she has someone as kind as you for a friend. Very nice poem; I liked this.
Scorp.

Re: A Girl In Bloom (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 06:17:48 PM AEST
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There is nothing sweeter than watching a young girl bloom into a beautiful flower. Lovely lovely write.

Rita

Re: A Girl In Bloom (User Rating: 1 )
by xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 04:17:02 AM AEST
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A really sweet poem, very touching. The image of a little girl blossoming like a rose throughout life is truly inspiring and captures the moment perfectly, great choice of imagery.

Keep writing, you indeed have a great talent :)

Take care,
Lots of love,
xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Re: A Girl In Bloom (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 10:29:45 AM AEST
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A lovely and touching weaving of words.
Like the petals of the rose your thoughts for your her unfold before us.

Well done

Steve

Re: A Girl In Bloom (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 04:30:24 AM AEST
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What an absolute wonderful and beautiful poem for what seems to be a wonderful and beautiful little girl from a wonderful and beautiful poet.

Your heart is so incredibly kind and loving.

Another masterpiece.

Thank you for sharing.

Hugggsss,

Tim
:)

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