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Array ( [sid] => 96138 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => And this is how she died (death in a fire) [time] => 2005-05-29 02:25:50 [hometext] => Fear of death shall not stop it. [bodytext] => is this what i have waited for,
is this what i have hoped and
dreamed for my whole death.

to awake in a a world with blood
rivers and burnig life, the end racing
me coming closer as life seems further away.

the pain love has caused cuts scars into my flesh,
deeper and deeper red escaping from my vains,
to be dead your whole life then die in scream of a worse fear.

a fire of hate and unworthiness burns
in a whirlpool sucking me in, a heart darker than
black is all thats left of me.

like before i am dead again and just as meaningless,
a black soul waiting for the next ending. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 13 [informant] => russ-dawg [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

And this is how she died (death in a fire)

Contributed by russ-dawg on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 02:25:50 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

is this what i have waited for,
is this what i have hoped and
dreamed for my whole death.

to awake in a a world with blood
rivers and burnig life, the end racing
me coming closer as life seems further away.

the pain love has caused cuts scars into my flesh,
deeper and deeper red escaping from my vains,
to be dead your whole life then die in scream of a worse fear.

a fire of hate and unworthiness burns
in a whirlpool sucking me in, a heart darker than
black is all thats left of me.

like before i am dead again and just as meaningless,
a black soul waiting for the next ending.

Copyright © russ-dawg ... [ 2005-05-29 02:25:50]
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Re: And this is how she died (death in a fire) (User Rating: 1 )
by Freak-of-the-Week on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 04:16:11 AM AEST
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Well, I won't pretend I know exactly what it's about...but the 3rd, 5th, and 6th stanzas had some really great phrases in them. Congrats. :-)

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