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Waiting for precious gangreen to set in,
Sterilisation in your perfect surgical mask,
Drowning your beer cask,
You try to keep an open mind.
Sweet sweet candy, with pepermint fire,
This conversations between you and yourself,
Noises from upstairs they make you perspire,
Dont sleep with the fishes she sleeps with the elves.

Well when she burns,
She sweats,
She gives what she gets,
When shes on fire baby,
Youll never forget.
Take your pride to the ringside,
A fist fight punch play,
What a torment to decide,
What goes on today.

Red, yellow blue zoom bang kalaedoscope,
Perfect for flashing the glimmer of hope,
The bringer of sunshine he suits a mercedes,
Perfect for playing along with them ladies,
He never saw it comin.
The buzz saw was humming.
Now they play at his funeral,
G-tar's a' strummin'
The tick of the metronome,
Soulfully numbin. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 13 [informant] => ripper_something_unusual [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Zoom Bang Kalaedoscope

Contributed by ripper_something_unusual on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:18:54 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Blue octave formation and yellow starlight grin,
Waiting for precious gangreen to set in,
Sterilisation in your perfect surgical mask,
Drowning your beer cask,
You try to keep an open mind.
Sweet sweet candy, with pepermint fire,
This conversations between you and yourself,
Noises from upstairs they make you perspire,
Dont sleep with the fishes she sleeps with the elves.

Well when she burns,
She sweats,
She gives what she gets,
When shes on fire baby,
Youll never forget.
Take your pride to the ringside,
A fist fight punch play,
What a torment to decide,
What goes on today.

Red, yellow blue zoom bang kalaedoscope,
Perfect for flashing the glimmer of hope,
The bringer of sunshine he suits a mercedes,
Perfect for playing along with them ladies,
He never saw it comin.
The buzz saw was humming.
Now they play at his funeral,
G-tar's a' strummin'
The tick of the metronome,
Soulfully numbin.

Copyright © ripper_something_unusual ... [ 2005-05-28 21:18:54]
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Re: Zoom Bang Kalaedoscope (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:43:31 PM AEST
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very deep intersting write gets right into ones thinking
Michelle

Re: Zoom Bang Kalaedoscope (User Rating: 1 )
by girltranscended on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 10:47:41 PM AEST
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yep, I do like it, and I like the way you put it out there, very punchy. Each stanza is so different but yet, yes, all similar. Great job!

:)

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