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Wondering if she's gone insane
As it all starts to die down
She falls to the ground
Bleeding from the inside out
Nothing does she think about
She doesn't know why this is wrong
She just needs something to help her stay strong
The bleeding stops
A new scar crops
The bleeding helps her through
Cause nothing else will do [comments] => 6 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 72 [informant] => living_dead_girl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )

Bleeding

Contributed by living_dead_girl on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:46:42 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

She cuts deep to the source of her pain
Wondering if she's gone insane
As it all starts to die down
She falls to the ground
Bleeding from the inside out
Nothing does she think about
She doesn't know why this is wrong
She just needs something to help her stay strong
The bleeding stops
A new scar crops
The bleeding helps her through
Cause nothing else will do

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Re: Bleeding (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:50:57 PM AEST
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very sad....... LDG is this you?? Its Michelle
sorry if Iv got the wrong one lol

Re: Bleeding (User Rating: 1 )
by Fears on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:59:53 PM AEST
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wow, this is really sad but a very good write either way. This poem is a very hard thing to understand for some...( the real feelings) but to other like i and maybe you...it is a general part of our day...

Life changing poem...keep posting on the site pls!

~Fears

Re: Bleeding (User Rating: 1 )
by poet70 on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:00:11 PM AEST
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So, is this a poem about yourself or someone you know of? It is a sad thing that people really do have to feel they need to cut in order to deal with inner pain, I am sorry if you are the one who is the cutter, hope you can find help to stop, I wouldn't think you would want to continue on forever doing this if you are the one cutting, good write, emotional, sad, and worded to where the reader deffentily know what you are writing about, the pain, the depression, the hurts, and ect, good write.

Re: Bleeding (User Rating: 1 )
by Ripper_Something_Unusual on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:25:42 PM AEST
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This poem really rings true with me. Ive been where this is at and its not nice. All I can say to whomever this poem concerns. Just dont give up, it might sound cheesy but everyone has to face up to their demons.

Re: Bleeding (User Rating: 1 )
by all_the_dead_roses on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:28:01 PM AEST
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I've been there too and I remember thinking physical pain is better than emotinal pain, and to me it is but I stopped 3 years ago and I hope if it you, you are talking about than you will too.

Re: Bleeding (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 08:28:41 AM AEST
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its good but u shouldnt cut tattoo are safer

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