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Array ( [sid] => 96088 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LASHING SEA [time] => 2005-05-28 16:49:12 [hometext] => Can mankind right himself and bring about peace upon this war torn earth? [bodytext] =>

LASHING SEA

Lashing eruptions in the sea of mankind
Troublous, vicious, restless, raging, and unkind
Principles, and standards smashed against rocks,
Dark deprivation with dreadful death walks.

Borderline shores collapsing, no self-control
Apathy, complete anarchy amidst stagnated sinkhole
Man has lost his way, resides in fallen manholes
Deep, dark, down under, no love, sleeping moles.



Gradually, subtlely, without notice, quiet thief,
Man's hearts turned to cold stones, no relief.
And if this is true, then we must ask why?
No feelings, nor outrage, nor emotions, nor outcry!

Bombardment of badness, unfeeling is our protection.
Stone hearts can no longer be hurt--lack motivation.
Discouragement brings weakness, tiredness, apathy.
Tear drops numbered ample to fill a huge ocean.

Dead are most religions, unwholesome, no longer worthy,
Filled with hypocrites, that hide themselves behind masks
White washed graves, rottenness with worms and fleshly.
Spirituality choked for love of money, hope for greatness basks.



Will mankind ever again experience calmness, quietude, peace?
Will the violent waves someday stop bashing, and lashing it's
hateful
release?
Who will calm the sea of mankind and bring lasting tranquility?
If left up to man, 'twil never be.....for stone hearts are deadly!

Our Creator will soon intervene, a complete intervention.
He has no other choice, you see, for man will annihilate himself
without question.
Exquisite delight of peace, no more pain, no more tears,
no more fears.
Falsely accused without validation, he will sanctify Himself
after thousands of years.



Come with me in your mind's eye amplified.
Would a Loving Creator leave us in this mess?
After all He's Love exemplified
Feelings of goodness, mildness, joy without any more tears.
Wondrous hope promised for umpteen years.
And all of this can be yours!

Created with Warm Love,
Lovingcritters,
consue
May 17, 2005



"Look He's making a New Heavens
and a New Earth......
And he will wipe out every tear from their eyes,
Death will be more, neither will mourning, nor pain,
nor outcry, for the former things (what we
are living right now) have all passed away!"
Bible........Rev 21:3&4--2Peter 3:13

"Hopeful anticipating smiles!"




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LASHING SEA

Contributed by Lovingcritters on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 04:49:12 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished





LASHING SEA

Lashing eruptions in the sea of mankind
Troublous, vicious, restless, raging, and unkind
Principles, and standards smashed against rocks,
Dark deprivation with dreadful death walks.

Borderline shores collapsing, no self-control
Apathy, complete anarchy amidst stagnated sinkhole
Man has lost his way, resides in fallen manholes
Deep, dark, down under, no love, sleeping moles.



Gradually, subtlely, without notice, quiet thief,
Man's hearts turned to cold stones, no relief.
And if this is true, then we must ask why?
No feelings, nor outrage, nor emotions, nor outcry!

Bombardment of badness, unfeeling is our protection.
Stone hearts can no longer be hurt--lack motivation.
Discouragement brings weakness, tiredness, apathy.
Tear drops numbered ample to fill a huge ocean.

Dead are most religions, unwholesome, no longer worthy,
Filled with hypocrites, that hide themselves behind masks
White washed graves, rottenness with worms and fleshly.
Spirituality choked for love of money, hope for greatness basks.



Will mankind ever again experience calmness, quietude, peace?
Will the violent waves someday stop bashing, and lashing it's
hateful
release?
Who will calm the sea of mankind and bring lasting tranquility?
If left up to man, 'twil never be.....for stone hearts are deadly!

Our Creator will soon intervene, a complete intervention.
He has no other choice, you see, for man will annihilate himself
without question.
Exquisite delight of peace, no more pain, no more tears,
no more fears.
Falsely accused without validation, he will sanctify Himself
after thousands of years.



Come with me in your mind's eye amplified.
Would a Loving Creator leave us in this mess?
After all He's Love exemplified
Feelings of goodness, mildness, joy without any more tears.
Wondrous hope promised for umpteen years.
And all of this can be yours!

Created with Warm Love,
Lovingcritters,
consue
May 17, 2005



"Look He's making a New Heavens
and a New Earth......
And he will wipe out every tear from their eyes,
Death will be more, neither will mourning, nor pain,
nor outcry, for the former things (what we
are living right now) have all passed away!"
Bible........Rev 21:3&4--2Peter 3:13

"Hopeful anticipating smiles!"








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Re: LASHING SEA (User Rating: 1 )
by Ripper_Something_Unusual on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 05:15:26 PM AEST
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Beautiful, truly beautiful, interesting structure. Fluent and the artwork really brings across the point of the poem very well. Well done.


Re: LASHING SEA (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 05:48:42 PM AEST
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Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant, and NO I do not think we can achieve peace before we anhilate our world. It is sad man has progressed so far yet no been able to ever achieve peace in the world. Power and greed will never let it happen.

Rita


Re: LASHING SEA (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 05:53:18 PM AEST
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He will save us from ourselves and we will have Peace finally ...This I must believe so I can go on in this world of darkness

Hugs

Shari


Re: LASHING SEA (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 07:17:18 PM AEST
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Awesome graphics.
Great write, mom.
luv, huggs,
yobrat,
emy


Re: LASHING SEA (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:31:23 PM AEST
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Great Apocalyptic writing this one.
It is a blessings if men still can have thespine to cry out and denounce the wrongs.It gets really bad when

"No feelings, nor outrage, nor emotions, nor outcry!"
Emotionless ness is itself an evil. Not the crying out.
But He hears - He knows and when the time is right, He will make it right.
Great poem. Awesome
Boo-bee


Re: LASHING SEA (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th February 2015 @ 12:30:15 AM AEST
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Here it is almost ten years later and I feel the world has by far gotten worse. :(

Awesome poem though, very awesome!!!




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