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[aid] => mick
[title] => Tales of a Drunk
[time] => 2005-05-28 12:28:13
[hometext] => This is PAST tense people...so no calling AA on me!!!! lol
[bodytext] => Give me rye, vodka, rum or beer
whatever poison you like; just keep it near
I prefer the hard stuff, but whatever you've got
be it red wine or white, bubbly, just give me a shot!!
You see, just about anything'll do....
expensive or cheap, hell even moonshine too!
Damnit I got this itch that I just can't scratch
look at me boys! A drunk girl---ain't I a catch??
oh man I've gone too long, the dt's are setting in
dizzy, shaking, hot...my air's getting thin
My doc said my liver's all fouled up; that I need to quit
so lets cheers for old times sake, and pass me one last hit.
Author's note: I'm just tipping my hat to a milestone I kicked to the curb a long time ago....Scorp ; )
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[topic] => 66
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[acomm] => 0
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[pollID] => 0
[score] => 34
[ratings] => 7
[editpoem] => 1
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[topicname] => drugabuse
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Tales of a Drunk
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 12:28:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Give me rye, vodka, rum or beer
whatever poison you like; just keep it near
I prefer the hard stuff, but whatever you've got
be it red wine or white, bubbly, just give me a shot!!
You see, just about anything'll do....
expensive or cheap, hell even moonshine too!
Damnit I got this itch that I just can't scratch
look at me boys! A drunk girl---ain't I a catch??
oh man I've gone too long, the dt's are setting in
dizzy, shaking, hot...my air's getting thin
My doc said my liver's all fouled up; that I need to quit
so lets cheers for old times sake, and pass me one last hit.
Author's note: I'm just tipping my hat to a milestone I kicked to the curb a long time ago....Scorp ; )
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Re: Tales of a Drunk
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 12:58:21 PM AEST
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wow that is deep.
And i am glad your through with that.
take care |
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Re: Tales of a Drunk
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by Fears on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 01:02:15 PM AEST
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hey, that is really good! I like it and i am glad that u have lostyour writers block...sooo sad 4 me! LOL, oh well i liked your write and i hope that the one you are suck on now comes along just as good! PM me anytime!
; )
~Fears |
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Re: Tales of a Drunk
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by SocialMisfit on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 01:04:18 PM AEST
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cool poem scorp, i liked the rhymes in this they worked really good, good thing u quit that habit so you could keep liveing and keep writeing so we can read your awsome poetry :).
SM |
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Re: Tales of a Drunk
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by jyssvw22 on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 03:03:04 PM AEST
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haha,, great!...thats great that you can write that way about something that must have been real hard for you to do, im proud of this peice for you....nice work
great write scorp |
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Re: Tales of a Drunk
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 03:41:51 PM AEST
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*applauds like a maniac*
Awesome, Scorp --- well, well done!
Oh and hey... great write, too. *wink*
Tipping a figurative hat to Scorp & that milestone,
~Snemmy~
(who doesn't really wear hats) |
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Re: Tales of a Drunk
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 03:58:49 PM AEST
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Claps for you!! I am so proud of you, Scorp. I have known so many people that have gone through this. It is not easy and so many do fail, but those that succeed find a strength they didn't realize they had and find that self-pride. I say "Yeah for our Scorp, and another 50 more."
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Tales of a Drunk
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 06:43:12 PM AEST
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Congrats to yer milestone, Scorp. !!!
Very nice writing, good way to celebrate yer milestone.
Huggsss,
Nats |
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Re: Tales of a Drunk
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by Zeldianus on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:57:16 PM AEST
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This is an amazing accomplishment! It is good that you realize this! I commend you for you dedication and hard-work!
Hugs,
Seth |
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Re: Tales of a Drunk
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by pixie on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 01:21:47 PM AEST
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a soul bearing write, I can relate to this as I have battled wth a drink problem for a few years. well well written,
pix xx |
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Re: Tales of a Drunk
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 1st November 2014 @ 01:37:37 AM AEST
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| Mmmm. how easy it is to run to the temporary relief, whatever we can find, to ease our sufferings. but they never truly satisfy. Congrats on getting some of your self back. |
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