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Lingering on the edge of death
Living such a cold life
No way out
Don't pull me through
Don't save my life
Just let me die
I'll be better off
Just leave me here
So I can go in peace
No tears
No fears
Just me
Flirting with suicide [comments] => 4 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 36 [informant] => living_dead_girl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Flirting with Suicide

Contributed by living_dead_girl on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 10:19:27 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Fliting with suicide
Lingering on the edge of death
Living such a cold life
No way out
Don't pull me through
Don't save my life
Just let me die
I'll be better off
Just leave me here
So I can go in peace
No tears
No fears
Just me
Flirting with suicide

Copyright © living_dead_girl ... [ 2005-05-28 10:19:27]
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Re: Flirting with Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by marshmalloska on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 04:23:04 PM AEST
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A sad and moving poem. Id offer sympathy or a listening ear, but i wouldnt want to patronise you. Good write

Re: Flirting with Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by nabokovfan87 on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 05:29:10 PM AEST
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nice write i often do the same thing most of my poems have the same type of eerieness to them. this write seemed week to me it has the words and the meaning but i feel it can be a lot stronger. the next time you decide to doodle about something liek this try to tap into exactly that moment instead of just making it so general. sometimes it can be hard but if u pull it off you will defenitely see the difference.

-nabokovfan87

Re: Flirting with Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by bethers_is_my_baby on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 02:12:08 PM AEST
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great job! keep up the good work! :)

Re: Flirting with Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 08:24:51 AM AEST
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its good but u got to think what everyone else will go through bye

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