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Array ( [sid] => 96008 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Life Without You [time] => 2005-05-27 21:17:07 [hometext] => you chose to leave me at the worst time in my life. the worst year of my whole life you, friend, decided i didn't need you and left me all alone [bodytext] => Struggling through life
I’m fighting in this strife
You have left
Me to suffer death
But you don’t care
That you are unfair
Of if I am dying
Because I gave up on trying
Because of you
When you became untrue
And told me many lies
What’s sad is you didn’t even try
To make things between us better
You just threw out my letter
Now that you’re not at my side
It’s not you I stand beside
I don’t know what to do
I’m fighting without you
I’ve gotten hurt many times in this war
Against our evil, deadly world
But, nothing has hurt as much
As the day we lost touch
The day you broke my trust
And left me in the dust
To fight on my own
You left me all alone

You ask how is my life?
Well without you, I’m losing the great strife
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Life Without You

Contributed by sprinter27 on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 09:17:07 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Struggling through life
I’m fighting in this strife
You have left
Me to suffer death
But you don’t care
That you are unfair
Of if I am dying
Because I gave up on trying
Because of you
When you became untrue
And told me many lies
What’s sad is you didn’t even try
To make things between us better
You just threw out my letter
Now that you’re not at my side
It’s not you I stand beside
I don’t know what to do
I’m fighting without you
I’ve gotten hurt many times in this war
Against our evil, deadly world
But, nothing has hurt as much
As the day we lost touch
The day you broke my trust
And left me in the dust
To fight on my own
You left me all alone

You ask how is my life?
Well without you, I’m losing the great strife

Copyright Â© sprinter27 ... [ 2005-05-27 21:17:07]
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Re: Life Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 07:15:45 AM AEST
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Very nice poem... Look like you are lonely be strong and good luck... mylady

Re: Life Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by xdeadxdollyx on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 10:23:21 AM AEST
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I have felt this way a lot before, with friends and boyfriends. I hate it so much when you feel like you have no one. It kills so much.

Re: Life Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by GAMEchief on Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 09:55:07 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry things like this have to happen. I know it must hurt.

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