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Array ( [sid] => 96005 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Killer Times [time] => 2005-05-27 20:42:21 [hometext] => i thought you were the best friend ever... but you went against your promises and killed all of our good, old times. now when ever i think about them i think, killer times. [bodytext] => Every time I see you
All of those old feelings
Come back and they seem true
Yet I’m still healing
From the last time.
I see you two next to each other
Looks like you’ve filled the lines
Don’t even bother
With me
You don’t need my help
Just let me be
You’ve filled my world with doubt
Your job is done
Just walk away
Like the last time we went wrong
You just left me to fight my way
Without you, you left my side
Without even saying goodbye
You tore out everything inside
And you’re letting me die
You don’t think you did any bad
Just want what you want which is her
Don’t realize you made me so sad
Don’t worry about the tears
They are just shed
Because of you
You messed with my head
And killed me, too
I cry not in pain
Just plain misery
But, if I stand in the rain
You can’t see the tragedy
Of tears creeping
Down my face
As I am weeping
Because of the good old days
When you and I were best friends
When you understood me
And said you’d be there ‘til the end
But you just let me fall from this tree
You just walked away
Walked right to your girl
I remember the day
You left me and I lost any will
That I had to live in this world
But you, friend, fell out of line
And killed me without a sword
You, friend, killed me with all our old times
Filled with cheer and hope
But you stabbed me in the back
Hung me by the rope
Pushed me off of track

Every time I see you
And your smiley face
I remember when you were true
But now it feels like we’re in a maze
Stuck passing each other
When you look at me, I just look down
And neither of us bother
To fix my frown
You don’t care about me
I just plain out don’t care
You left me to fight the enemy
You’ve become unfair
And have killed my soul
I just don’t want to live no more
Friend or foe? You equal out as foe
I’ve fought long enough in this war
It was easier when
It was you I was beside
And back then
I liked who was inside
You and I
When it was you I trusted
But then you let me cry
I have been busted
And broken
By you, old friend
I guess I paid the token
For trusting you in the end

I suffered
You smiled
In yours and my lines
Lied killer times
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Killer Times

Contributed by sprinter27 on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 08:42:21 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Every time I see you
All of those old feelings
Come back and they seem true
Yet I’m still healing
From the last time.
I see you two next to each other
Looks like you’ve filled the lines
Don’t even bother
With me
You don’t need my help
Just let me be
You’ve filled my world with doubt
Your job is done
Just walk away
Like the last time we went wrong
You just left me to fight my way
Without you, you left my side
Without even saying goodbye
You tore out everything inside
And you’re letting me die
You don’t think you did any bad
Just want what you want which is her
Don’t realize you made me so sad
Don’t worry about the tears
They are just shed
Because of you
You messed with my head
And killed me, too
I cry not in pain
Just plain misery
But, if I stand in the rain
You can’t see the tragedy
Of tears creeping
Down my face
As I am weeping
Because of the good old days
When you and I were best friends
When you understood me
And said you’d be there ‘til the end
But you just let me fall from this tree
You just walked away
Walked right to your girl
I remember the day
You left me and I lost any will
That I had to live in this world
But you, friend, fell out of line
And killed me without a sword
You, friend, killed me with all our old times
Filled with cheer and hope
But you stabbed me in the back
Hung me by the rope
Pushed me off of track

Every time I see you
And your smiley face
I remember when you were true
But now it feels like we’re in a maze
Stuck passing each other
When you look at me, I just look down
And neither of us bother
To fix my frown
You don’t care about me
I just plain out don’t care
You left me to fight the enemy
You’ve become unfair
And have killed my soul
I just don’t want to live no more
Friend or foe? You equal out as foe
I’ve fought long enough in this war
It was easier when
It was you I was beside
And back then
I liked who was inside
You and I
When it was you I trusted
But then you let me cry
I have been busted
And broken
By you, old friend
I guess I paid the token
For trusting you in the end

I suffered
You smiled
In yours and my lines
Lied killer times




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Re: Killer Times (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 09:04:57 PM AEST
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Sprint.. I am sorry that there has been such a breakdown. A well written poem with such sadness. I am sorry.


Re: Killer Times (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 09:16:04 PM AEST
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so much emotion, well written


Re: Killer Times (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 12:08:07 AM AEST
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Nice write...You really let your emotions flow; good job. One small thing I would've done different: the line; "When it was you I trusted, but then you let me cry, I have been busted and broken..." I would've changed it to broken and busted instead. It flows better...Good job nonetheless!
Scorp.




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