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Contributed by
dantoad
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Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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cold seeps in
through the holes in your jacket
fragile hearts and fragile hands
it takes alot to be a man
i smile and they take the credit, smile
and she sees my eyes
her eyes have seen so much
such hardships, such life learned lessons
are these
and when she dies i will light all my matches
i will cry my heart out and ask her
"take me with you!" in our native tongue
and maybe she will
hardened hearts and roughened hands
you will never be that man
try to even understand
even if you think you can
she is weak
and i hate it and i understand it
but i wish it were not so
and i am not as weak, and i never want to see
the skies that way again,
pink from losing a friend
i have yet to meet again, though she has moved back since
empty hearts and empty hands
all i wanted was that man
i tried to make him mine
and maybe someday, sometime,
we will find our time to shine
i am sorry if i have broken your heart, maybe i can fix it...
or maybe i shouldn't try, its the thought that makes you want to purge
"~~....words never age....~~"
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dantoad
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2003-01-01 23:20:00]
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Re: change
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by OreO on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 06:58:17 AM AEST
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This is so sad...is that not true or what......words never age.....ahh that is the beautifullest line....i enjoyed this alot....this is sad but yet it's a beautiful way to say your sorry as well ...it's full of depth and deep emotion, thank you for sharing this one....
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