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[aid] => mick
[title] => Awakened to a Dream
[time] => 2005-05-27 01:26:41
[hometext] => Pablo Neruda reminded me of yesterday tonight and in doing so, handed me tomorrow.....
[bodytext] =>
The world's afire
Poets have nothing to say
Clarity has broken the night
Tomorrow lives today
From the shadows, it came
On long forgotten wings
Silence binding them together
In the everything
The sky was theirs, hearts
Bursting free to ride the wind
As heaven opened itself up
She handed it to him
And he... only had to see her
And she... could barely breathe
Poetry passed between them
When words they didn't need
[comments] => 15
[counter] => 723
[topic] => 14
[informant] => Silent-No-More
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[score] => 60
[ratings] => 12
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => DreamsandWishes
)
Awakened to a Dream
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 01:26:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The world's afire
Poets have nothing to say
Clarity has broken the night
Tomorrow lives today
From the shadows, it came
On long forgotten wings
Silence binding them together
In the everything
The sky was theirs, hearts
Bursting free to ride the wind
As heaven opened itself up
She handed it to him
And he... only had to see her
And she... could barely breathe
Poetry passed between them
When words they didn't need
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Re: Awakened to a Dream
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by mylastwords on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 02:38:55 AM AEST
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Beautiful write, I really liked it. Sweet! It is true that people can speak through poetry.
xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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Re: Awakened to a Dream
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 04:23:34 AM AEST
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True friendship comes when silence between two people is comfortable.
--Dave Tyson Gentry
"Friendship needs no words..."
-- Dag Hammarskjold.
What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies. -- Aristotle
Besides beautiful ... what more can I say ?
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Awakened to a Dream
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 10:12:09 AM AEST
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This is lovely and u write verry well nice flow
and direction a touching peice . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Awakened to a Dream
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 02:27:22 AM AEST
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Poetry does not need words and love is poetry. I go with Scott's quotes. Very apropos.
Rita |
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Re: Awakened to a Dream
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 05:38:15 AM AEST
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Wow now thats a poem. There was so much beauty in those words that one can feel every syllable of it.
Great poem Madam. Looking forward to see more.
Jane xx |
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Re: Awakened to a Dream
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 05:58:30 AM AEST
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| I agree with everyone great write. |
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Re: Awakened to a Dream
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 10:41:45 AM AEST
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| ...sigh...um, yeah, what you said (or didn't) |
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Re: Awakened to a Dream
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by freckle on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 09:29:37 AM AEST
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Snemmy, how beautiful! What a wonderful write! I loved the last two lines.
Carol |
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Re: Awakened to a Dream
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:27:19 PM AEST
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What an absolutely beautiful write!!!
Jenni |
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Re: Awakened to a Dream
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 10:56:26 AM AEST
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I have to say I'm a little envious...
I wish I could write like this.
Your words are always so full of feeling Snemmy. The last 4 lines really hit me. I have feeling I know what this is about, but I will not say more on it.
Great write sweetie,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Awakened to a Dream
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by Dorkfish on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 06:20:00 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed that! |
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Re: Awakened to a Dream
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 10:19:02 PM AEST
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Well, I understand Phill's bit of envy. Aye, and almost feel it myself.
This is breathtaking, and in an astonishingly simple way. The brevity, the simple eloquence... such is why I write, such is what I am always trying for. Bravo! I can say little more.
Andrew
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Re: Awakened to a Dream
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by wizard on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 12:06:28 PM AEST
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i loved this poem.
for it is a simple reminder that love is poetry in motion...and that finding love leaves us speachless.
wiz |
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Re: Awakened to a Dream
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by brew on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 12:13:31 PM AEST
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So ....so.......true. Nice to see some can find words. Those are what hits the soul and the most inner feelings, of all the emotions. Very beautiful write. Lovely.
Brew~ |
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Re: Awakened to a Dream
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 11:30:03 PM AEST
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*sighs*
Beautiful and charming.
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