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Array ( [sid] => 95924 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Freedom and Delight [time] => 2005-05-27 01:17:51 [hometext] => more playing ^_^ always, abraham [bodytext] => There is no beginning fit for you. It is easier to write my pain, than to write the endlessness that hides in your eyes.
I have seven years of loss. Seven years of heart break and pain. Seven years of silences and tears; and yet, one hour with you, one minute, one immeasurable second with you and all my life falls beneath me and forgets that it was there.
Arizona is only for you. The great, green mountains' crippled peace are crumbled under the press and weight of your lips.
I always say that i do not have the right words, but the words are so simple in you.
The clear blue shade the everglade the soft embrace of your smile smiling smiles.
If I could begin, I would begin with your pain. The meloncholy mild strength that I find touches me touching you.
Let the iron bars fall! Let your voice rise over the softest song; and your voice is beautiful brilliant blinded by your sight blinded by your torment.
The cage bird sings! The caged bird sings
your voice is a feather touching the edge
touching the caged bird sings a simple song of freedom and delight
of freedom and delight
the caged bird a simple song freedom and delight
I am the free birds flight. I am the night over a shattered sky.
Together we are
Hand in hand we are
Side and side we are
Touch to touch we are
Singing softer singing
solemn singing
the caged bird's
the free bird's
song, singing
love and life
Singing the saddest ending sung:
There is no beginning fit for you,
because you have begun.
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Freedom and Delight

Contributed by iodinelove on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 01:17:51 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



There is no beginning fit for you. It is easier to write my pain, than to write the endlessness that hides in your eyes.
I have seven years of loss. Seven years of heart break and pain. Seven years of silences and tears; and yet, one hour with you, one minute, one immeasurable second with you and all my life falls beneath me and forgets that it was there.
Arizona is only for you. The great, green mountains' crippled peace are crumbled under the press and weight of your lips.
I always say that i do not have the right words, but the words are so simple in you.
The clear blue shade the everglade the soft embrace of your smile smiling smiles.
If I could begin, I would begin with your pain. The meloncholy mild strength that I find touches me touching you.
Let the iron bars fall! Let your voice rise over the softest song; and your voice is beautiful brilliant blinded by your sight blinded by your torment.
The cage bird sings! The caged bird sings
your voice is a feather touching the edge
touching the caged bird sings a simple song of freedom and delight
of freedom and delight
the caged bird a simple song freedom and delight
I am the free birds flight. I am the night over a shattered sky.
Together we are
Hand in hand we are
Side and side we are
Touch to touch we are
Singing softer singing
solemn singing
the caged bird's
the free bird's
song, singing
love and life
Singing the saddest ending sung:
There is no beginning fit for you,
because you have begun.




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Re: Freedom and Delight (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 01:19:48 AM AEST
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It's melancholy by the way. Considering how touchy I am about my spelling, you'd think i'd be more careful ^_^

always, abraham


Re: Freedom and Delight (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 02:15:52 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem...The way you strung it together....the wording....Nice write!!
Scorp.


Re: Freedom and Delight (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 02:36:21 AM AEST
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Play on friend as I hear heaven singing.
Makes one jus wonna jump off in there where u r. A melodic masterpeice of freedom and joy.
huggs, big smiles,
emy
more please?




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