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Array ( [sid] => 95913 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What if? [time] => 2005-05-26 23:40:20 [hometext] => maybe not a poem... but I like to use this site to save what I write and get some feedback as well, thanks [bodytext] => There she was
Standing there all alone
I knew she would be the love of my life
I wanted to speak to her
But when you find true love
Time freezes over becuase of nerves
Trying to think of the perfect words
Hoping your hair is styled just the right way
Seeking confidence
All take a great deal of time
When you manage to complete these tasks
Time Resumes
What is rather troublesome
Time travels faster and faster
In order to catch up - Remain on scheduel
Sadly, you miss out on the girl of your dreams
Just because you were full of worries and doubts
So why worry about the small imperfections?
Because when you worry regrets plague your soul
You begin to wonder what if
and wondering what if
Is the worst thing there is
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What if?

Contributed by TheKid on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 11:40:20 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

There she was
Standing there all alone
I knew she would be the love of my life
I wanted to speak to her
But when you find true love
Time freezes over becuase of nerves
Trying to think of the perfect words
Hoping your hair is styled just the right way
Seeking confidence
All take a great deal of time
When you manage to complete these tasks
Time Resumes
What is rather troublesome
Time travels faster and faster
In order to catch up - Remain on scheduel
Sadly, you miss out on the girl of your dreams
Just because you were full of worries and doubts
So why worry about the small imperfections?
Because when you worry regrets plague your soul
You begin to wonder what if
and wondering what if
Is the worst thing there is

Copyright © TheKid ... [ 2005-05-26 23:40:20]
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Re: What if? (User Rating: 1 )
by Skinney86 on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 11:42:19 PM AEST
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NICE!!! I can relate to it a lot. I worry so much about what people think...

Re: What if? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 11:47:30 PM AEST
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Good write. It really says much.
huggs,
emy

Re: What if? (User Rating: 1 )
by babislice on Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 07:00:57 PM AEST
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you have great material here- you could definitely make something out of this

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