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Array ( [sid] => 95902 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Open wings [time] => 2005-05-26 21:42:33 [hometext] => Drape them across ..... [bodytext] =>

Drape them across
Shoulders
And wrap you in them
Just so that you can
Hold me closer than
Anyone ever
I have never felt so warm
Can you feel it?
There is no ground beneath our feet
I hope you are not afraid of heights
I want you to trust me
I want to be your world
I feel like my heart will burst
It is so much for me
Almost too much
But then just like that
You kiss me and it is as if
It could stop and never start up again
I love you and how you make me feel
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Doriens_Picture [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Open wings

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:42:33 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Drape them across
Shoulders
And wrap you in them
Just so that you can
Hold me closer than
Anyone ever
I have never felt so warm
Can you feel it?
There is no ground beneath our feet
I hope you are not afraid of heights
I want you to trust me
I want to be your world
I feel like my heart will burst
It is so much for me
Almost too much
But then just like that
You kiss me and it is as if
It could stop and never start up again
I love you and how you make me feel

Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2005-05-26 21:42:33]
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Re: Open wings (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:54:49 PM AEST
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wow, this poem truly touches the heart john, beautiful poem
and i loved how you used the metephor of wings, magical

Re: Open wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty06 on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:56:22 PM AEST
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I really liked your poem. Even though it didn't have a real rythm to it, it was still nice. The description of feeling and relating the feeling of a kiss to that of flight was great. Keep up the good work! ^_^

Re: Open wings (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 10:02:08 PM AEST
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Beautiful tribute 2 love very nice writting . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Open wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 11:08:05 PM AEST
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with your strong wings to surrond nothing bad will happen. Amazing write.

Re: Open wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Skinney86 on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 12:01:53 AM AEST
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Love can make you write wonderful things. . . Good write!

Re: Open wings (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 11:59:57 AM AEST
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Lovely words very sweet

Love Angelxxx

Re: Open wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 06:43:56 PM AEST
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Very sweet! It's nice to hear a man that can express his feelings about love in such a way. It is rare. Good job!

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