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Array ( [sid] => 95884 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Who Will I Choose ? [time] => 2005-05-26 20:04:24 [hometext] => I actually can sing this and have a rythm playing in my head .. lol .. but this poem is when a girl is with somebody that she really cares about but likes somebody else .. please comment ! [bodytext] => Who Will I Choose ?

You hold me in your arms
And everything seems alright
But I know deep down inside my soul
I wanna be with someone else tonight

I love spending time with you
That’s true, no lie
But when he hugs me tight
It’s hard to get by

He knows that I’m with you
And he doesn’t wanna mess things up
But he trapped me deep within his eyes
And I just love being stuck

What am I to do?
When my heart loves two?
Who am I to choose?
I want you both
But that can’t be
Who will I chose?
And what will happen to me?

You kissed my lips
When I was down
You built a wall
No harm could get around

But yet I smile
When he walks by
He winks at me
And love is in his eyes

Yet you don’t know
Have no clue
How I’ve been acting
What’s my heart up to?

I just can’t explain
Why I’m not satisfied
I’m sorry for the pain
And the look of confusion in your eyes

I have no where to run
Nowhere to hide
But the choice must be made
This very night

What will I do?
Who will I chose?
I can only have one guy
To say I love you...


May 26, 2005

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Who Will I Choose ?

Contributed by xXluckie_lynnXx on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 08:04:24 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



Who Will I Choose ?

You hold me in your arms
And everything seems alright
But I know deep down inside my soul
I wanna be with someone else tonight

I love spending time with you
That’s true, no lie
But when he hugs me tight
It’s hard to get by

He knows that I’m with you
And he doesn’t wanna mess things up
But he trapped me deep within his eyes
And I just love being stuck

What am I to do?
When my heart loves two?
Who am I to choose?
I want you both
But that can’t be
Who will I chose?
And what will happen to me?

You kissed my lips
When I was down
You built a wall
No harm could get around

But yet I smile
When he walks by
He winks at me
And love is in his eyes

Yet you don’t know
Have no clue
How I’ve been acting
What’s my heart up to?

I just can’t explain
Why I’m not satisfied
I’m sorry for the pain
And the look of confusion in your eyes

I have no where to run
Nowhere to hide
But the choice must be made
This very night

What will I do?
Who will I chose?
I can only have one guy
To say I love you...


May 26, 2005





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Re: Who Will I Choose ? (User Rating: 1 )
by Faust on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 10:40:39 PM AEST
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I love this poem. It may be wierd that i'm a guy but theres something similar going on in my life..i really like this poem alot and you should really keep writing.

Eternally Punished,
Faust


Re: Who Will I Choose ? (User Rating: 1 )
by matts_sweetie_04 on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 12:12:54 PM AEST
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i cant relate to this poem but it is still a really great poem. keep up the great work lil cousin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Emily




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