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Array ( [sid] => 95807 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bottled Emotions [time] => 2005-05-26 08:01:14 [hometext] => How can you tell someone that you love them... when they can't say it themselves. It creates a conflict in your soul that you can't fix on your own. But eventually, after keeping to yourself for so long, you tell them... it's all a matter of how... [bodytext] =>

Bleak memories,
With no hope
Or faith.
A lack of care
A pointless dare.
I challenge myself
To solitude.
I leace my soul
In a bottle
Safe from harm,
Or any charm.
Trapped and barely alive
I barely strive.
I survive
By devouring myself,
My emotions,
My care,
My heart.
Ripping it apart,
Piece by piece.
I feel nothing,
For I have devoured my pain.
Burning rain
Of insults and threats
Surround my soul.
I try not to care.
I have heard my share.
Stranded on an island
Created by my desire
To calm the raging fire.
Too often becoming a liar
Just so they will let me be.
Set me free.
The clear crystaline bottle
Filled with blue, violet and red.
So rarely have I bled.
I'm filled with dread.
The colored fluids touch the top.
Emotions overflow
A radiant show
Of sorrow and death
Stealing my breath
As I collapse to my knees
And cry
In the bitter breeze.
Tears flowing
The color of blood
And taste of solitude and regret.
Trapped with my tears,
Bleeding forgotten fears
The years
Of torment flash before my eyes
All the lies
Whispered in my ears
Throughout the years.
I need an escape.
Freedom from hate.
I turn to you,
Unsure of what to do.
I beg for you help and part.
You held my heart,
Fragile and torn apart.
With time and care
You tried to repair
Every sinew and string
The pain and the sting
I know it will bring.
But the pain I do not feel
But a new feeling became real.
A moment of love to share
A kiss and a ressurection of care.
So gently you held me close
And told me it would be alright
Removing fright.
A new light
Entered my soul.
Spreading love
And making me open my eyes
To stare at my prize.
You.
A great burden lifted,
My soul has shifted.
It opens to you and your touch
Bringing with it much
Joy and happiness.
Please, I beg of you.
I have given you all I could.
Please give me a hint that you care.
Another second of passion
To share.
Please love me,
Or possibly more...
For I can only speak
To you
The truth:

I love you. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 13 [informant] => nanonan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Bottled Emotions

Contributed by nanonan on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 08:01:14 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry





Bleak memories,
With no hope
Or faith.
A lack of care
A pointless dare.
I challenge myself
To solitude.
I leace my soul
In a bottle
Safe from harm,
Or any charm.
Trapped and barely alive
I barely strive.
I survive
By devouring myself,
My emotions,
My care,
My heart.
Ripping it apart,
Piece by piece.
I feel nothing,
For I have devoured my pain.
Burning rain
Of insults and threats
Surround my soul.
I try not to care.
I have heard my share.
Stranded on an island
Created by my desire
To calm the raging fire.
Too often becoming a liar
Just so they will let me be.
Set me free.
The clear crystaline bottle
Filled with blue, violet and red.
So rarely have I bled.
I'm filled with dread.
The colored fluids touch the top.
Emotions overflow
A radiant show
Of sorrow and death
Stealing my breath
As I collapse to my knees
And cry
In the bitter breeze.
Tears flowing
The color of blood
And taste of solitude and regret.
Trapped with my tears,
Bleeding forgotten fears
The years
Of torment flash before my eyes
All the lies
Whispered in my ears
Throughout the years.
I need an escape.
Freedom from hate.
I turn to you,
Unsure of what to do.
I beg for you help and part.
You held my heart,
Fragile and torn apart.
With time and care
You tried to repair
Every sinew and string
The pain and the sting
I know it will bring.
But the pain I do not feel
But a new feeling became real.
A moment of love to share
A kiss and a ressurection of care.
So gently you held me close
And told me it would be alright
Removing fright.
A new light
Entered my soul.
Spreading love
And making me open my eyes
To stare at my prize.
You.
A great burden lifted,
My soul has shifted.
It opens to you and your touch
Bringing with it much
Joy and happiness.
Please, I beg of you.
I have given you all I could.
Please give me a hint that you care.
Another second of passion
To share.
Please love me,
Or possibly more...
For I can only speak
To you
The truth:

I love you.




Copyright © nanonan ... [ 2005-05-26 08:01:14]
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Re: Bottled Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by Rocks on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 02:39:45 PM AEST
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i hope you've got the same words in response. great write


Re: Bottled Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by suicidal_imbecile on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:14:22 PM AEST
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what an awsome poem, i like how it flows and how it eventually morphed into something different, right now im down with love, i hate it, i've opened i gave myself and it was for nothing, the love i felt from him dissapeared and i was left as a child, cold and crying in the rain
kate


Re: Bottled Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by cherrygurl6289 on Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 07:16:09 PM AEST
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thats deep check out mine




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