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Guiding me thru these rays of sunshine
Birds singing me favorite song

I am walking on water
Feeling miles high
Ready to embrase this new journey

Destiny unknown
Curious is me mind
For the unwritten path before me

Show me the way to go
Like a warm wind holding me
Embrasing me with your love

As I fly in the sky high above
Ever so soothing and sweet
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You Are The Air That I Breathe

Contributed by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:10:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

As butterflies surround me
Guiding me thru these rays of sunshine
Birds singing me favorite song

I am walking on water
Feeling miles high
Ready to embrase this new journey

Destiny unknown
Curious is me mind
For the unwritten path before me

Show me the way to go
Like a warm wind holding me
Embrasing me with your love

As I fly in the sky high above
Ever so soothing and sweet
You are the air that I breathe

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Re: You Are The Air That I Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by Phantomdream on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:14:23 PM AEST
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IT's astounding how much this primative poem portrays in such simple language. Lovely thoughts.

Re: You Are The Air That I Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:26:39 PM AEST
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I hope that you continue to fly so high in that sky.
Keep on breathing the air, it seems to be doing you good !!

Steve

Re: You Are The Air That I Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by ElatedNBliss on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:43:24 PM AEST
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i wish i had a sweet love like that.

Re: You Are The Air That I Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by rosethorn100 on Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 05:11:41 PM AEST
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beautiful poem - wish u lots of lucks - u truly deserve it girlie

huggggggggggggggs xxxxx
rosey

Re: You Are The Air That I Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 11:45:23 AM AEST
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nice feelings of aloofness. This gives all the impressions of air and lightness.
Very well done!!

Re: You Are The Air That I Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by Darkhorse71 on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 03:16:32 PM AEST
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Nats, this is awesome! the feel of the promise of the joyous unknown.

Peace and Hugs, john

Re: You Are The Air That I Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 08:20:31 AM AEST
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So this was your first write, Nats? Can't tell it. It's beautiful with it's imagery and wonderful words.

Huggssss

Tim:)

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