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Justify
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Take my words and tear them up
now you've got the victor's cup
oh, increase your righteousness
keep on yapping make me less.
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Just one person to the world
spikes and daggers you have hurled
hope you feel better for this
'cause my feelings you've not missed.
~
At least when I lay down my head
I know the words that I have said
but oh, its not you it must be me
as you twist my words for the world to see.
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ladyfawn
... [
2003-01-01 11:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Justify
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkmind on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 03:10:33 PM AEST (User
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yeah me to sounds like what my lifes like good poem |
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Re: Justify
(User Rating: 1 ) by wolfflow on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 04:09:10 PM AEST (User
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a new side to you, but an impressive one, short, simple and straight in there |
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Re: Justify
(User Rating: 1 ) by thorns on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 02:58:02 PM AEST (User
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like the harsh and biting style here! :) |
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Re: Justify
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cynthia on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 06:16:15 PM AEST (User
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Nessa, this is so different, even for you. I loved it. Excellent. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Justify
(User Rating: 1 ) by colinb on
Friday, 23rd May 2014 @ 01:23:23 AM AEST (User
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short,confronting,straight to the point Excellent |
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