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Array ( [sid] => 95739 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => come make me better [time] => 2005-05-25 16:27:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A scar for each time
you told me you loved me
for i knew it didn't mean a thing
a love i knew was too good to be true
i was stupid to ever believe it

whether i cut your name
or burn a smile
as long as it leaves a trace

a reminder of all
the happiness taken away
a reminder of all my pain

if only i knew
that it all was true
that you did really love me
and that you still do

maybe i could manage
to be strong enough
to make it through
this time so tough

i was strong before
but you made me weak
without you i cant even
make it a week

now its been more than three
and I'm so far gone
i not sure i can remember
how it feels to be loved

now I'm covered in scars
i look like a monster
now i need you to save me more than ever

if the words you spoke were ever true
then you should know how much i need you
if you meant any of it all, ever
then please baby, come make me better

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 22 [informant] => bethers_is_my_baby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

come make me better

Contributed by bethers_is_my_baby on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 04:27:59 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

A scar for each time
you told me you loved me
for i knew it didn't mean a thing
a love i knew was too good to be true
i was stupid to ever believe it

whether i cut your name
or burn a smile
as long as it leaves a trace

a reminder of all
the happiness taken away
a reminder of all my pain

if only i knew
that it all was true
that you did really love me
and that you still do

maybe i could manage
to be strong enough
to make it through
this time so tough

i was strong before
but you made me weak
without you i cant even
make it a week

now its been more than three
and I'm so far gone
i not sure i can remember
how it feels to be loved

now I'm covered in scars
i look like a monster
now i need you to save me more than ever

if the words you spoke were ever true
then you should know how much i need you
if you meant any of it all, ever
then please baby, come make me better

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato

Copyright Â© bethers_is_my_baby ... [ 2005-05-25 16:27:59]
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Re: come make me better (User Rating: 1 )
by ElatedNBliss on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 05:31:24 PM AEST
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bows down to you:: awesome. poem :)

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