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Array ( [sid] => 95724 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Not the Same [time] => 2005-05-25 13:27:44 [hometext] => I just wrote this poem rescently. Its about someone very close to me. [bodytext] => You can’t see the changes that I’ve made
But you always find a way
To tell me that I’m not the same
And you leave me with nothing to say

And you refuse to ever give in
So I’m the only one who bends
Who smiles and pretends
For you and in front of all of your friends

And you soak yourself in your drink
***** anything I may think
You just yell and fight and scream
And threaten what tomorrow will bring

All I gave you was room
Just as I did last June
But all you did was assume
That my rain was a monsoon

But you can’t see the changes I’ve made
And You always find a way
To tell me I’m not the same

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Pisces101 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Not the Same

Contributed by Pisces101 on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 01:27:44 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

You can’t see the changes that I’ve made
But you always find a way
To tell me that I’m not the same
And you leave me with nothing to say

And you refuse to ever give in
So I’m the only one who bends
Who smiles and pretends
For you and in front of all of your friends

And you soak yourself in your drink
***** anything I may think
You just yell and fight and scream
And threaten what tomorrow will bring

All I gave you was room
Just as I did last June
But all you did was assume
That my rain was a monsoon

But you can’t see the changes I’ve made
And You always find a way
To tell me I’m not the same

Copyright Â© Pisces101 ... [ 2005-05-25 13:27:44]
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Re: Not the Same (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 01:42:57 PM AEST
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great write very good emotion
Its very sad the emotion and anguish painted a picture out for me. It was wonderful write.

Keep writing
keep smiling
sweetstranger

Re: Not the Same (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 02:51:18 PM AEST
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If you feel what you're saying and doing is positive then don't worry what others have to say...Nice little write. Scorp.

Re: Not the Same (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 10:24:23 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC by the way...!! I look forward to more of your poems.
Scorp.

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