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Array ( [sid] => 9569 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => finally [time] => 2003-01-01 08:30:00 [hometext] => okay last night i had a dream i was standing at the alter with my ex.... my first love...
i couldnt rememba exactly what i said as my vows but i tried to put it into a poem...
i found it to be very meaningful... only cuz today after not talking to him in over a year... i was looking for his number and a lil after that his new number appeared on the caller id... [bodytext] => I stand here before you, wondering if its true...
I've waited my whole life and finally im hand in hand
in front of our families at an alter with you
I wanted this day to come and it seems a bit over due
but here we are finally and today is the begining and first step
in having a life with you.
as many dont know i will now share...
from the instant i met you i knew for ever in my heart.... you'd be there
i met you too young for us to start out then... even though we tried it all soon had came to an
end.
i fell in love with you when i was only 11 years old. i knew then what i know now... and i didnt have to be told.
although they did say we werent meant to be... here we stand today as the tears roll down to smiles that gleam..
they told me lies and thought i would care.
but i saw through them.... i just wanted you there.
so here we are we'll show them all... just what they didnt care to see...
you loved me all this time we were apart... as i missed you you felt the same...
missing me ached your heart..
so this time we'll make it
this time we'll come through
i didnt imagine this fairy tale...
this time its not make believe..
i've woken up out of the bad dream
and realized a whole new world a reality
your finally here with me [comments] => 1 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 2 [informant] => tinyone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
finally

Contributed by tinyone on Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 08:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I stand here before you, wondering if its true...
I've waited my whole life and finally im hand in hand
in front of our families at an alter with you
I wanted this day to come and it seems a bit over due
but here we are finally and today is the begining and first step
in having a life with you.
as many dont know i will now share...
from the instant i met you i knew for ever in my heart.... you'd be there
i met you too young for us to start out then... even though we tried it all soon had came to an
end.
i fell in love with you when i was only 11 years old. i knew then what i know now... and i didnt have to be told.
although they did say we werent meant to be... here we stand today as the tears roll down to smiles that gleam..
they told me lies and thought i would care.
but i saw through them.... i just wanted you there.
so here we are we'll show them all... just what they didnt care to see...
you loved me all this time we were apart... as i missed you you felt the same...
missing me ached your heart..
so this time we'll make it
this time we'll come through
i didnt imagine this fairy tale...
this time its not make believe..
i've woken up out of the bad dream
and realized a whole new world a reality
your finally here with me




Copyright © tinyone ... [ 2003-01-01 08:30:00]
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Re: finally (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 09:16:41 PM AEST
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HI TINYONE,
THIS IS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL WRITE,
TURE LOVE IS HARD TO FIND.HOLD ON TO WHAT YOU GOT.
RICHARD CAMPBELL.




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