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Innocence lost
Tears mixed in with blood
As holiness is taken
And used
Violation now
I am the abused

A merciless act
While the stench still hangs
I am so unclean
And unforgivable
For the ungodly I have seen

Disowned daughter
Left upon the streets
Ripping open my garments
Tearing away my soul
Whilst crying out I lament

Lying naked
Upon the dirty gutter
Burned into my mind all the regret
His raging eyes
His fury
A memory I will never forget

Grotesque being I am
Destruction of purity

As any respect do maim
Heart continues to accuse

*******
There’s nothing worse than SHAME…
**********
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Deadly Shame

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:26:10 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

******
Innocence lost
Tears mixed in with blood
As holiness is taken
And used
Violation now
I am the abused

A merciless act
While the stench still hangs
I am so unclean
And unforgivable
For the ungodly I have seen

Disowned daughter
Left upon the streets
Ripping open my garments
Tearing away my soul
Whilst crying out I lament

Lying naked
Upon the dirty gutter
Burned into my mind all the regret
His raging eyes
His fury
A memory I will never forget

Grotesque being I am
Destruction of purity

As any respect do maim
Heart continues to accuse

*******
There’s nothing worse than SHAME…
**********

Copyright Â© pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2005-05-25 03:26:10]
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Re: Deadly Shame (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:33:37 AM AEST
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Awww....sad poem rach, really something tho, very good in puting it to words too, tis a amzing piece, great job

~Clark

Re: Deadly Shame (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:39:39 AM AEST
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powerfull, very touching write, the last bit...."There’s nothing worse than SHAME" is awsome it just gives this the extra bit to make it a one in a million poem.

SM

Re: Deadly Shame (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:52:41 AM AEST
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woa powerful and very sad write.
your words touched me and i felt tears running down my face reading this.
hugs ever need to talk let me know.

take care

by the way this write is great.

Re: Deadly Shame (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:39:28 AM AEST
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Your message came through loud and clear. Very powerful write.

Rita

Re: Deadly Shame (User Rating: 1 )
by Stellar on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 08:03:27 AM AEST
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Very raw and very powerful!! This was excellent! I wrote something about a similar experience, about innocence being lost called unforgettable.

Great write!!
Stellar

Re: Deadly Shame (User Rating: 1 )
by crap_snapper on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 09:19:02 AM AEST
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There is nothing good or likable in this poem. i hate it.

Re: Deadly Shame (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 11:59:00 AM AEST
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Very good emotional and personal write...but never be ashamed of who you are, you'll come across enough people in life that'll try to kick you down, don't let yourself be one of them. Take Care, Scorp.

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