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Array ( [sid] => 95682 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => your life, my art [time] => 2005-05-25 03:23:21 [hometext] => i just started writeing, kinda differant, alot of metaphores tell me what ya think [bodytext] => life is a canvas
paint it as you may
we all start out with white
but red ill paint mine today
burn my portrait burn
nicotine stains and lipstick
to hell in a hand basket we go
im ready how about you?
murder lead with ink
catatonic bullets
tears of lead
pry the brain from my head
torn pages of persuasion
lullaby of a blackened heart
in disposable pain
riding on the tears of god
you want it as bad as i do
i can read you like a book
you feel it too
life as art
ill paint your portrait too. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 469 [topic] => 43 [informant] => socialmisfit [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
your life, my art

Contributed by socialmisfit on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:23:21 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



life is a canvas
paint it as you may
we all start out with white
but red ill paint mine today
burn my portrait burn
nicotine stains and lipstick
to hell in a hand basket we go
im ready how about you?
murder lead with ink
catatonic bullets
tears of lead
pry the brain from my head
torn pages of persuasion
lullaby of a blackened heart
in disposable pain
riding on the tears of god
you want it as bad as i do
i can read you like a book
you feel it too
life as art
ill paint your portrait too.




Copyright © socialmisfit ... [ 2005-05-25 03:23:21]
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Re: your life, my art (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:33:37 AM AEST
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I really like this piece.
It tells alot what your saying.
Life is a big trial.
take care awsome write.


Re: your life, my art (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:34:20 AM AEST
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oh i do like this!! its a very mysterious read and 1 of power and strength
great poem i really enjoyed reading this and the metephors were brilliant


Re: your life, my art (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 06:02:58 AM AEST
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Definitely this is a brilliant write. I enjoyed it. venkat


Re: your life, my art (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 12:02:50 PM AEST
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This was a good piece! Creative wordplay. Sometimes those make the best poems...the ones you just start writing, not really knowing where it's headed... Scorp.


Re: your life, my art (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 09:37:34 AM AEST
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This poem is great. I liked the way you described the little things like the tears of lead. It fit perfectly together and it was brillant.

take care
christina




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