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Array ( [sid] => 95651 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => realized [time] => 2005-05-24 20:56:15 [hometext] => laughed at? [bodytext] => Do you know what I've realized?
they think I'm a joke
I thought they knew me, too bad they don't

I thought I was Ok
not too pritty, not plain
but even in that I wasn't playing the same game

I thought I was smart
but a genious they say
and they use all my work and they mock it away

I thought I was fun
but instead I'm a freak
and I realized just how much their words mean to me

I thought I was diiferent
but now I'm just weird
so they hide me, avoid me and glance around for the week

I had trusted them
thought they knew the real me
but now i'm a liar, a fake, I can't deal

people I now
my best friends in the world
they call a ***** and probably think I'm a hor

i can't understand it
afterall that I've done
that they could just turn their back on me, run

why dotn they like me
why cause the pain that i feel
I thought I was pepppy , and so full of zeal

I thought I was funny
poked fun at once/twice
I thought i was laughing w/ them, but I'm really laughed at [comments] => 4 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 48 [informant] => spazz911 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

realized

Contributed by spazz911 on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 08:56:15 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Do you know what I've realized?
they think I'm a joke
I thought they knew me, too bad they don't

I thought I was Ok
not too pritty, not plain
but even in that I wasn't playing the same game

I thought I was smart
but a genious they say
and they use all my work and they mock it away

I thought I was fun
but instead I'm a freak
and I realized just how much their words mean to me

I thought I was diiferent
but now I'm just weird
so they hide me, avoid me and glance around for the week

I had trusted them
thought they knew the real me
but now i'm a liar, a fake, I can't deal

people I now
my best friends in the world
they call a ***** and probably think I'm a hor

i can't understand it
afterall that I've done
that they could just turn their back on me, run

why dotn they like me
why cause the pain that i feel
I thought I was pepppy , and so full of zeal

I thought I was funny
poked fun at once/twice
I thought i was laughing w/ them, but I'm really laughed at

Copyright © spazz911 ... [ 2005-05-24 20:56:15]
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Re: realized (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 09:06:24 PM AEST
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omg kc, we ARE laughing with u, not at u! ok with a few exceptions. but we all have those undeniably embarrassing moments... just some more than others... kc i dont know what to say to you on this one... except that you're wrong... yea yer weird but so am i, we all are of course. but kc... i love u all the more u kno that right? like friend love obviously lol. kc idc how you act or what u look like (beautiful in my eyes) yer my bff and always will be.
luv n hugs,
jennie*

Re: realized (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 09:34:12 PM AEST
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This was a painful poem to read, so full of pain that yiou have expressed well. KC, having also read Jennie's comment, I fervently hope that you have (at least partially) misunderstood the situation. There may be some cruel people out there - often there are - but Jennie is there for you, and I am sure you have some friendships you can lean on. For those that are mean to you that way, well, I would say you don't need them. I know that doesn't take the pain away, but it is true nonetheless. You will find your true friends in all this, and I hope you feel better soon. You have always shown me a side that is nice and friendly and I am sure (with the exception of mean, jealous types) that others see that, too. Be well.

Re: realized (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 11:32:06 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem, and I doubt you're a freak,etc. Some people just have poor taste...lol You'll soon discover your true friends; give it time.... Scorp.

Re: realized (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 01:37:21 AM AEST
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Who laughed at you?
Let me at umm. smile.
Friend, I've never laughed at u now if your write some funny I'll laugh tho.
Hang tuff my dear friend.
luv, huggs,
emy

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