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Array ( [sid] => 95645 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Obviously Untitled [time] => 2005-05-24 20:39:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Writing away, empty my head,
What should I write? What should be said?

I could write of a girl, who doesn't exist,
But I've done that before... she's one on my list

Or perhaps of the one who broke my heart I could write,
but that's been done too... and again it just might

Maybe I'll write of the trees or the sky,
Or the mountains and hills...how they're seen through my eyes

For now in my mind these words stay locked tight,
Until I know just what I should write. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 276 [topic] => 25 [informant] => wizard [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Obviously Untitled

Contributed by wizard on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 08:39:18 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Writing away, empty my head,
What should I write? What should be said?

I could write of a girl, who doesn't exist,
But I've done that before... she's one on my list

Or perhaps of the one who broke my heart I could write,
but that's been done too... and again it just might

Maybe I'll write of the trees or the sky,
Or the mountains and hills...how they're seen through my eyes

For now in my mind these words stay locked tight,
Until I know just what I should write.

Copyright © wizard ... [ 2005-05-24 20:39:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Obviously Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 08:48:12 PM AEST
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i like it alot
good job

Re: Obviously Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 09:45:39 PM AEST
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Oh no! You have to let something out or you might get a dreaded case of WRITER'S BLOCK. Can be fatal to a poet. Better take 2 poems and go have a lie down.

Smiles,
Rita

Re: Obviously Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:47:24 PM AEST
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On the contrary..

To write about what ya can't,
and with such feeling is absolute genius!

Not many poets can do this..
when they're down...they're down..

This write is a testimony to the tenacity
of a true writer...and poet!

Awesome!!
I felt every word bro..

Billy

Re: Obviously Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 08:06:44 AM AEST
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I just write whatever comes to mind........alot of times it makes no sense, and then it makes alot. Some of the spirals that swirl in the thoughts can create for you.
Liked it

Brew~

Re: Obviously Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 04:04:25 PM AEST
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P~

Even when you are writing about nothing you are writing about more
somethings than most. The title is perfectly applicatory! (How's that
for a thesaurutated word?) [and yes ... thesaurutated IS a word! :P]

(it's in the Breezy dictionary) lmao

okay ... about this here poem. The line ...

"Or the mountains and hills...how they're seen through my eyes"

something there just touches me ... can't explain why, but I love it!

~B
( one to go .... :P )

Re: Obviously Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 02:32:33 AM AEST
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...& the need to write is written...I love it!

BigLoveMuchPeace,
~Me

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