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with mouse in hand
to journey to another land..
I'd caught a glimpse of something slow-
the pace of which I didn't know

A virus came to me today
to seek a weak reluctant prey...
music.. pictures.. poems passed,
the day that my computer crashed!
%$#@! [comments] => 6 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Man_On_High [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

CRASH!

Contributed by Man_On_High on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 06:54:39 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

...so as I sat
with mouse in hand
to journey to another land..
I'd caught a glimpse of something slow-
the pace of which I didn't know

A virus came to me today
to seek a weak reluctant prey...
music.. pictures.. poems passed,
the day that my computer crashed!
%$#@!

Copyright © Man_On_High ... [ 2005-05-24 18:54:39]
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Re: CRASH! (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 07:00:59 PM AEST
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man...i know the feeling - and %$#@! explains it perfectly.

good one.

PMC

Re: CRASH! (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 07:28:05 PM AEST
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Been there, done that. Great expletive! My feeling is that one day progress and technology will bring the end of the world.

Smiles,
Rita

Re: CRASH! (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 08:50:50 PM AEST
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lol...thats sucks!!

glad to see you back up and running

Re: CRASH! (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 08:56:36 PM AEST
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Oh No............I can certainly emphasize with you Billy. Mine crashed so hard it took me 5 months to get it repaired Had to finally send it back to the manufacturer! All my poems, music etc. could be salvaged, thank God.....but now I'm so afraid it's going to happen again......I now put everything on disk...no more crashes for me!
And I thought I was well protected with every sort of technology available! Be ward Billy
there are a lot of sick people lerking out there!
And good luck!
Warm love
consue

Re: CRASH! (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 05:54:21 AM AEST
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Nice poem ..But true

Re: CRASH! (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:13:22 PM AEST
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at least a virus crashed yours, mine just crashes for no reason at all. 6 year old compaqs....its a wonder why they sold at all. i would say that this seemed a bit more forced in rhyme than usual. you changed your rhyme scheme from the usual that ive seen, which shows you at least try variations, very nice.

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