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always writing of a girl I don't even know
if it drew a picture, it would settle my mind
then this girl would be easy to find
until i find her I'll live like a rube
and read what it writes, this ink in the tube

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My Pen

Contributed by wizard on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 07:38:36 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

It's as if this pen has a mind of its own
always writing of a girl I don't even know
if it drew a picture, it would settle my mind
then this girl would be easy to find
until i find her I'll live like a rube
and read what it writes, this ink in the tube

PMC

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Re: My Pen (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 07:56:38 PM AEST
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awesome bro.. really
I dont think ive read that..
good stuff
and if ya ask me ya not gettin enough reads or comments on it

Billy

Re: My Pen (User Rating: 1 )
by poet70 on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 08:27:13 PM AEST
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( with smile on my face )
I give you a good report,
this is such a witty and cute poem,
I just loved it, not much to it, but it was just
so cute and different then what I have been reading, very refreshing, thanks
Tammi

Re: My Pen (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 02:29:26 AM AEST
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Nice! I like it...So few words, but chosen carefully to still express yourself well. Hope love has found you now...

Scorp.

Re: My Pen (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:24:01 PM AEST
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I like the flow of the poem. Short, simple and sweet. Hope ya found ur dream girl.
Hugs,
Dreamer

Re: My Pen (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 11:12:48 AM AEST
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Short and to the point. And what a point you've reached with this ...

paul, I've always admired the way in which your heart lies open.
And you have demonstrated that, (again wonderfully) in this
write.

Question ... if you happen to chance upon this girl . . . would you
recognize her? Would she, you? IMO, you have won already, by
leaving yourself open and receptive to emotion and the
sweet comfort that another soul can deliver.

As always
with admiration and affection,

~Breezy

Re: My Pen (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 02:05:22 AM AEST
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Ah, the unrealized muse...I love it!!!

BigLoveMuchPeace,
~MisfitMe

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