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Array ( [sid] => 95432 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Picture Perfect [time] => 2005-05-23 04:01:10 [hometext] => There is no way to describe this poem. [bodytext] => Don't look at me, but through me.
Don't ask me, just tell me.
Mould me into your picture perfect.
Break me and the blame me.

I am useless and stubborn.
I am smart with purpose.
I am everything you wanted of me.
And I am ashamed.

Don't lead me, just push me.
Help me up, then knock me down.
Make me weak, then ask for strength.
Destroy your picture perfect.

I am dirty and I am flawed.
I am young and cold.
I am nothing you ever wanted.
And I know you're ashamed.

Yell at me, then soothe me.
Create and then kill me.
Do what you will if you must.
Because I am your picture perfect. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 25 [informant] => broken_wingz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Picture Perfect

Contributed by broken_wingz on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 04:01:10 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



Don't look at me, but through me.
Don't ask me, just tell me.
Mould me into your picture perfect.
Break me and the blame me.

I am useless and stubborn.
I am smart with purpose.
I am everything you wanted of me.
And I am ashamed.

Don't lead me, just push me.
Help me up, then knock me down.
Make me weak, then ask for strength.
Destroy your picture perfect.

I am dirty and I am flawed.
I am young and cold.
I am nothing you ever wanted.
And I know you're ashamed.

Yell at me, then soothe me.
Create and then kill me.
Do what you will if you must.
Because I am your picture perfect.




Copyright © broken_wingz ... [ 2005-05-23 04:01:10]
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Re: Picture Perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 04:53:27 AM AEST
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the short and snappy lines were really effective, made the poem flow well! i enjoyed reading this, thought it was pretty powerful


Re: Picture Perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 05:09:36 AM AEST
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Broken_wingz

Interesting
To me this reads as the struggle of a teenager with her/his mother/father
I think you could have titled it the "struggle",but then I don't know your thought for this poem.
I like the mystery behind it.

Sinned




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