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Array ( [sid] => 95423 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To My Prom Queen [time] => 2005-05-23 01:38:10 [hometext] => i went to prom with the girl i like and man it was awsome, i gave her this poem wish me luck :D [bodytext] => i went to my first prom
never knew what to expect
i thought i loved you before
now all i can do is think of you more

how perfect it was
when i danced with you
how perfect you looked
when you smile like you do

most guys think your cute
but your more than that to me
beauty tempered with kindness and caring
evin the rose i gave you wilts with envy

so these words are for you
every singe, heartfelt line
crafted with love and care
no longer can i keep my heart in confine

how much i wanted to tell you
right there as i said g'night
how much i wanted to kiss you
standing there under the starlight

so here i am telling you now
how i felt then
hopeing to get a reaction
dreaming this might be a mutual attraction

please just let me know,for i am unsure
being friends is fine with me
but i cant help but ask can there be more? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 500 [topic] => 2 [informant] => socialmisfit [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
To My Prom Queen

Contributed by socialmisfit on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 01:38:10 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



i went to my first prom
never knew what to expect
i thought i loved you before
now all i can do is think of you more

how perfect it was
when i danced with you
how perfect you looked
when you smile like you do

most guys think your cute
but your more than that to me
beauty tempered with kindness and caring
evin the rose i gave you wilts with envy

so these words are for you
every singe, heartfelt line
crafted with love and care
no longer can i keep my heart in confine

how much i wanted to tell you
right there as i said g'night
how much i wanted to kiss you
standing there under the starlight

so here i am telling you now
how i felt then
hopeing to get a reaction
dreaming this might be a mutual attraction

please just let me know,for i am unsure
being friends is fine with me
but i cant help but ask can there be more?




Copyright © socialmisfit ... [ 2005-05-23 01:38:10]
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Re: To My Prom Queen (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 02:26:11 AM AEST
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yay! i'm so happy for you,i can imagine what you felt like and still do,because that feeling is impossible to fade.This is a very expressive poem too,i felt like I was there,lol,not to be a cockblocker,j/k wit u.But I wish u luck,tho u might not need it once she hears how u feel bout her.t/c and keep it up.
Love,
andrea


Re: To My Prom Queen (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 11:20:48 AM AEST
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awww that is so sweet .
I am sure she will loves this.
Glad that you had fun at the prom.
great write.


Re: To My Prom Queen (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 03:14:33 AM AEST
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I hope she can see the romantic side of your heart,because it out shines any star,why should anyone wish you luck,when your passion cries out loud an undieing love!
Great Poem-Alot of feeling!! I wish the two of you the best luck love has to give,becuz without two special people I don't think love can really live!!! A 5 ***** !!!!
P.S. Thanks for your nice comment on mine,
TKOP!!!!!

DAN!!!!!!


Re: To My Prom Queen (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 09:35:33 AM AEST
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This is beautiful. The way you told her that she is more then just cute to you would make any girls heart melt.. I liked this poem. It is very very very good...

take care
christina




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