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You dropped me
Said you where there to lend
A hand when, I was in pain
But then you lied
And let me be
You didn’t even try
I lost and you gained
I lost you
You won her
You were so untrue
But all that mattered
To you was
That you got her
It was my lost
My trust you shattered
I guess I wasn’t important
Just someone to promise
That I was someone and meant
A lot to you and you said
That you’d always be there
But for her, I was left alone
Without you, next to me, where
You said you’d always be

But you walked away
You destroyed me
On that day
When you left me
And all your promises
Were broken
My strong trust in you
After three years,
Has finally been broken
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Broken Trust

Contributed by sprinter27 on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:19:06 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

You caught me, but then
You dropped me
Said you where there to lend
A hand when, I was in pain
But then you lied
And let me be
You didn’t even try
I lost and you gained
I lost you
You won her
You were so untrue
But all that mattered
To you was
That you got her
It was my lost
My trust you shattered
I guess I wasn’t important
Just someone to promise
That I was someone and meant
A lot to you and you said
That you’d always be there
But for her, I was left alone
Without you, next to me, where
You said you’d always be

But you walked away
You destroyed me
On that day
When you left me
And all your promises
Were broken
My strong trust in you
After three years,
Has finally been broken

Copyright Â© sprinter27 ... [ 2005-05-22 21:19:06]
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Re: Broken Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by irememberyou on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:39:00 PM AEST
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I like it, its good. Keep it up.

Re: Broken Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:09:03 PM AEST
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hi sprint

i hope you can be ok after whatever happened. if i can help or if you need someone to talk to, holler my way. hang in there.

Re: Broken Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 08:17:39 PM AEST
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im sry this happened to u, but y wont u tell me who?
me

Re: Broken Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by xdeadxdollyx on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 10:24:49 AM AEST
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It is SO hard to trust someone, I trust no one in my life. Everything I have been through, I dont know if I can ever trust again.

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