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not meant to be mine
lives of another
and mine have entwind

I dont get these
no moment are mine
I steal them like thieves
taking a cheap dime

Nobody gives them
I steal them, thats wrong
I scavenge a moment
twist them, blend them all gone

You can't have a moment
there needs to be two
a sharing of clock ticks
ticking in glue

holdin thouhts forward
escping a mo
flees like a dagger
life holding foes

So I pick and I dig
and I bury them gone
stealing your moments
untill all else are gone

Lashing out cruely
screaming in vain
stealing that moment
I play harsh game
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STOLEN MOMENTs

Contributed by spazz911 on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Stolen moments
not meant to be mine
lives of another
and mine have entwind

I dont get these
no moment are mine
I steal them like thieves
taking a cheap dime

Nobody gives them
I steal them, thats wrong
I scavenge a moment
twist them, blend them all gone

You can't have a moment
there needs to be two
a sharing of clock ticks
ticking in glue

holdin thouhts forward
escping a mo
flees like a dagger
life holding foes

So I pick and I dig
and I bury them gone
stealing your moments
untill all else are gone

Lashing out cruely
screaming in vain
stealing that moment
I play harsh game

Copyright © spazz911 ... [ 2005-05-22 20:35:00]
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Re: STOLEN MOMENTs (User Rating: 1 )
by kydistortion69 on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:26:39 PM AEST
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has an almost vampiric confessional tone to it..i like it alot

Re: STOLEN MOMENTs (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:33:46 PM AEST
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thats kinda weird... a good weird. coolio kc.
jennie*

Re: STOLEN MOMENTs (User Rating: 1 )
by evilfairy on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 02:46:15 AM AEST
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alrighty....this i like a lot.

interesting other comment saw it as vampiric. i saw it as possibly relating to someone involved in an affair? as such, i really like the take on it...it's inspiring me to write along the same vein.

it's a fairly emotional piece but with a harsh reality to it.

"holdin thoughts forward
escaping a mo"

i've always been a bit of a fan of slang in poetry. makes it more real...doesn't seem contrived.

thanks for sharing your work..i really like it :)

Re: STOLEN MOMENTs (User Rating: 1 )
by evilfairy on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 02:46:49 AM AEST
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ps. i'd be interested to hear what it is actually about...

Re: STOLEN MOMENTs (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 12:46:43 PM AEST
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Hi kc

I don't see this as vampiric (maybe it's me) but it's a sign of someone reaching out for someone special anyway they can. Reminds me of years gone by when I would "accidentally" bump into the cheerleader in my class so I could talk to her. I can't say stealing is wrong because I have done it myself.

I loved the read, full of emotion and powerful description, like use of the word scavenge and ticking in glue. Great imagery.

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