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Fate’s Dominant Grasp
Contributed by
sean88
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Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 11:25:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Summers gaze lies beyond next dawn
Along with hope which won’t re-spawn,
Darkness looms within my clutch
Evermore effortless it is to touch,
Hands bound together by destiny’s chains
Resistance is useless furthermore enhances the pain,
Muscles swell and become distorted
All efforts to prevent have been thwarted,
Conditions exacerbate past the horizon
My endeavour climaxes but still fails to control them
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sean88
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2005-05-22 11:25:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Fate’s Dominant Grasp
(User Rating: 1 ) by weezer45 on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:06:10 PM AEST (User
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it is very very dark i like it but you should try less with the rhyming and more on the poem explain more cause i dont really understand what u are trying to tell. but so far you are on a good track. |
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Re: Fate’s Dominant Grasp
(User Rating: 1 ) by sean88 on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:14:32 PM AEST (User
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Sorry if it was unclear...the meaning is in there just i buried it deep. For those who can't understand:
The idea is that things, such as hope and current life conditions, worsen and go out of control and there is nothing i can do to make them better. |
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