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Array ( [sid] => 95297 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => even though your not here, your in our thoughts. [time] => 2005-05-21 22:18:37 [hometext] => An okay poem I wrote... but feel free to critize [bodytext] => Deep thoughts of you fill my mind as
I lye awake thinking of how it would
be if you were still here.
How I long to be with you on Father's Day,
Just like its always been.
But this year there's a new movie playing
in my head, this year,you wont be there.
And even as much as we miss you,
cry for you, pray for you, and think about you,
it still wont make a difference.
Why does life have to be so unfair?
I guess its true what they say "the good die young"
You didnt deserve to go, maybe am I selfish because
Im not ready to let go yet? But what ever the circumstance,
I need you to know, that we all love you and will be
thinking of you everyday, escpecially on Father's Day.

love ya dad. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 15 [informant] => irememberyou [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FathersDayPoems )

even though your not here, your in our thoughts.

Contributed by irememberyou on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:18:37 PM in AEST
Topic: FathersDayPoems

Deep thoughts of you fill my mind as
I lye awake thinking of how it would
be if you were still here.
How I long to be with you on Father's Day,
Just like its always been.
But this year there's a new movie playing
in my head, this year,you wont be there.
And even as much as we miss you,
cry for you, pray for you, and think about you,
it still wont make a difference.
Why does life have to be so unfair?
I guess its true what they say "the good die young"
You didnt deserve to go, maybe am I selfish because
Im not ready to let go yet? But what ever the circumstance,
I need you to know, that we all love you and will be
thinking of you everyday, escpecially on Father's Day.

love ya dad.

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Re: even though your not here, your in our thoughts. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:38:16 PM AEST
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I can so relate to this write in a big way.
Very touching write and there are many others out there will be doing the same thing jus remembering.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: even though your not here, your in our thoughts. (User Rating: 1 )
by roguexzia on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:47:19 PM AEST
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Like this write.'
It is an emotional peice.
Makes me feel Sad.
Sad for you.

I think you portrayed your thoughts well.

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