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Array ( [sid] => 95273 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The person that I am [time] => 2005-05-21 19:39:47 [hometext] => now I know what it means to be a bad person. [bodytext] => Finally I understood,
what they meant the whole time.
Until now I just sat there,
a thought the thoughts of mine.

Suddenly it came to me,
as tough it opened up the door,
and now I know the truth,
as if I've hitted the floor.

Where I go I do bring pain,
I'm the one to blame.
All my hope will end in vain,
and my life the same.

And that as punishment for being,
the person that I am.
But I know, what I've done,
and I'll take like a man.

The person that I am,
the evil that I did,
It should be stopped here and now,
the wood it must be lit.

Burn me alive, I deserve it.
I've brought more tears than hope.
but if that was me, I know it was,
now please tighten the rope.

Hang me from a tree,
and shoot in my chest,
I will not be happy,
Until the pain's at rest.

Forgive me for being a bad person.
It will all be over soon. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 13 [informant] => DanishPoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The person that I am

Contributed by DanishPoet on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 07:39:47 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Finally I understood,
what they meant the whole time.
Until now I just sat there,
a thought the thoughts of mine.

Suddenly it came to me,
as tough it opened up the door,
and now I know the truth,
as if I've hitted the floor.

Where I go I do bring pain,
I'm the one to blame.
All my hope will end in vain,
and my life the same.

And that as punishment for being,
the person that I am.
But I know, what I've done,
and I'll take like a man.

The person that I am,
the evil that I did,
It should be stopped here and now,
the wood it must be lit.

Burn me alive, I deserve it.
I've brought more tears than hope.
but if that was me, I know it was,
now please tighten the rope.

Hang me from a tree,
and shoot in my chest,
I will not be happy,
Until the pain's at rest.

Forgive me for being a bad person.
It will all be over soon.

Copyright © DanishPoet ... [ 2005-05-21 19:39:47]
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Re: The person that I am (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 09:35:10 PM AEST
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This is dark. I know how you feel. I liked how you used the old (hanging, burning) and the new (shooting) all together as ways for them to end life maybe they can do that to me to. Hope that everything gets better and keep writing.

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