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Array ( [sid] => 95272 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Redemption [time] => 2005-05-21 19:37:05 [hometext] => For all the religious people out there [bodytext] => Lord,
Please hear me out
I haven't talked to you
In a long time
I've done so much
I can't escape
I've seen so much
I can't get the replay
out of my head

Reach out and pull me out
of this hell I'm in
I can't make it
without you
I'm nothing
without you
make me something

You sent me
an angel
to pull me out
of this hell
She sees me for who I am
and still loves me
She is my redemption
She is my saving grace

I see your nail peirced hand
It matches my scared wrist
as wounds touch
you pull me out
of this darkness
pull me out of this bottle
and get out of this insomnia
Pull me to heaven
Pull me to you

Be my redemption
Be my saving grace
Pull me out of this misery(bottle)
I want so much more
than what's been given
save me [comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 48 [informant] => emokid [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Redemption

Contributed by emokid on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 07:37:05 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Lord,
Please hear me out
I haven't talked to you
In a long time
I've done so much
I can't escape
I've seen so much
I can't get the replay
out of my head

Reach out and pull me out
of this hell I'm in
I can't make it
without you
I'm nothing
without you
make me something

You sent me
an angel
to pull me out
of this hell
She sees me for who I am
and still loves me
She is my redemption
She is my saving grace

I see your nail peirced hand
It matches my scared wrist
as wounds touch
you pull me out
of this darkness
pull me out of this bottle
and get out of this insomnia
Pull me to heaven
Pull me to you

Be my redemption
Be my saving grace
Pull me out of this misery(bottle)
I want so much more
than what's been given
save me

Copyright © emokid ... [ 2005-05-21 19:37:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Redemption (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 11:33:51 PM AEST
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Everything you need is inside you. Look inside and you will find the free will he gave you to succeed and be the person you want to be. He is with you every moment but he cannot change your will, you have too. His love and grace is with you always. I am not religious, but I a deeply spiritual. His spirit is inside us all as is his strength. There is AA to help as well as many counselors out there. If you want to change, it is in your power to do so.

Have faith in the universe,
Dove

Re: Redemption (User Rating: 1 )
by hotie05 on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 01:32:58 PM AEST
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that poem sounds like someone i know

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