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Array ( [sid] => 95266 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Split!! [time] => 2005-05-21 19:00:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My Mom And Dad Have Split,
It’s Caused A Massive Shock Through The Town,
People Walk Past Me,
And See My Frown.

They Ask “Hayley, How Are You Doing Darling?”
Please Leave Me Alone,
I Deal With Things In My Way,
And That’s Not With Anyone, Its On My Own!

I Want My Family Together Again,
But If My Mom Is Going To Be Sad,
Then No Way,
I Don’t Want My Mom To Come Back.

That Sounds Mean,
But I Find It Hard To Explain This,
I Have So Much Emotion,
And It Seriously Feels Like S**t!

What I Meant Was,
If My Mom Is Going To Be Unhappy With My Dad,
Then I Don’t Want Her With Him,
Because I Don’t Like Her Being Sad.

But At The Same Time,
My Dads Heart Is Broken,
There Are Way Too Many Things,
Left Unspoken.

In My House Are Many Things,
That Are Not Being Said,
I Have So Many Things To Say,
But I Think I Will Sound Like An Airhead.

I Love My Dad So Much,
But I Hate Seeing Him So Broken,
He Needs To Speak,
But His Thoughts And Emotion Is So Hidden.

I Want My Mom And Dad Together Again,
But I Don’t Want Them To Row,
It’ll Get Easier…
Somehow!!

[Please comment] [comments] => 2 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 65 [informant] => BuggY [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

The Split!!

Contributed by BuggY on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 07:00:44 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

My Mom And Dad Have Split,
It’s Caused A Massive Shock Through The Town,
People Walk Past Me,
And See My Frown.

They Ask “Hayley, How Are You Doing Darling?”
Please Leave Me Alone,
I Deal With Things In My Way,
And That’s Not With Anyone, Its On My Own!

I Want My Family Together Again,
But If My Mom Is Going To Be Sad,
Then No Way,
I Don’t Want My Mom To Come Back.

That Sounds Mean,
But I Find It Hard To Explain This,
I Have So Much Emotion,
And It Seriously Feels Like S**t!

What I Meant Was,
If My Mom Is Going To Be Unhappy With My Dad,
Then I Don’t Want Her With Him,
Because I Don’t Like Her Being Sad.

But At The Same Time,
My Dads Heart Is Broken,
There Are Way Too Many Things,
Left Unspoken.

In My House Are Many Things,
That Are Not Being Said,
I Have So Many Things To Say,
But I Think I Will Sound Like An Airhead.

I Love My Dad So Much,
But I Hate Seeing Him So Broken,
He Needs To Speak,
But His Thoughts And Emotion Is So Hidden.

I Want My Mom And Dad Together Again,
But I Don’t Want Them To Row,
It’ll Get Easier…
Somehow!!

[Please comment]

Copyright Â© BuggY ... [ 2005-05-21 19:00:44]
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Re: The Split!! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 07:17:51 PM AEST
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Well gotta tell ya they did one thing and that is raise u right.
In this write I see your pain but in that pain u r aren't worrying for your self but your parents.
A very touching write and strong very strong.
I do know that even tho parents don't realize at the time the impact on the children. I raised my three kids without their fathers help so I know that it's really hard to get thru.
You have one concellation and that is u know and see what it does to the parents and you've done this with both parents.
I know it probably don't mean much right now but u should be proud of yourself. You parents should read this as they will be so touched at your care and kindness towards them both.
I have no clue how old u r but u have wisdom and understandinh.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: The Split!! (User Rating: 1 )
by BuggY on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 04:49:33 AM AEST
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Hey, i am 13. thank you so much for what you have said. It means so much. Thank You!
Hayley-Ree xxx

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