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Array ( [sid] => 95261 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => im so pathetic [time] => 2005-05-21 18:04:17 [hometext] => [bodytext] => its only been ten minutes
since i talked to you last
but already to me it seems
eternity has passed

still eleven hours more
till i can hear your voice again
it seems almost unbearable
the torture will now begin

i did not see this comng
though i knew id miss you greatly
but not till now did i realize
just how hard this would be for me

im hoping i can handel this
though right now im not so sure
just to hear you sweet loving voice
is all im wishing for

i know youve probably
not even left by now
but i still cant help but anticipate
the moment youll be back

if only i could have talked to you
just one short minute more
maybe i wouldnt be so upset
and sitting on the floor

i know im overeactin
cause i know that youll be back
but i just cant stop thinkin about you
yea i know that im pathetic

anywho, i guess im done
cause i cant think of anymore lines
so i guess this rhyme is over now
so try not to laugh at me hun

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 2 [informant] => bethers_is_my_baby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
im so pathetic

Contributed by bethers_is_my_baby on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 06:04:17 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



its only been ten minutes
since i talked to you last
but already to me it seems
eternity has passed

still eleven hours more
till i can hear your voice again
it seems almost unbearable
the torture will now begin

i did not see this comng
though i knew id miss you greatly
but not till now did i realize
just how hard this would be for me

im hoping i can handel this
though right now im not so sure
just to hear you sweet loving voice
is all im wishing for

i know youve probably
not even left by now
but i still cant help but anticipate
the moment youll be back

if only i could have talked to you
just one short minute more
maybe i wouldnt be so upset
and sitting on the floor

i know im overeactin
cause i know that youll be back
but i just cant stop thinkin about you
yea i know that im pathetic

anywho, i guess im done
cause i cant think of anymore lines
so i guess this rhyme is over now
so try not to laugh at me hun

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato




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Re: im so pathetic (User Rating: 1 )
by Sahara on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 07:16:36 PM AEST
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I wouldn't say that you're pathetic, not at all, I would however say that you are truely inlove.

Sonya


Re: im so pathetic (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:42:10 AM AEST
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yup being in love will do that to ya.. good job


Re: im so pathetic (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 08:33:57 PM AEST
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You are not pathetic in the least!! This was well written. It happens to ppl who are in love!!
Jenni


Re: im so pathetic (User Rating: 1 )
by kasean on Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 02:15:19 AM AEST
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I LOVED IT! I can totally relate and i hate feelin pathetic when i get a little obsessive. But I think obsessing about someone only means you care about them!




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