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Array ( [sid] => 95255 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dying Heart [time] => 2005-05-21 17:27:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Why are you leaving?
is it because soemthing i did or is it simply just me,
if did something then im sorry I didn't mean to harm your,
If I didn't then im still sorry,

What can i do to keep you,to hold you, to love you,
Without your warmth my heart will grow cold,
and i'll cry alone,
but you can't hear this because your already gone...

All that remains are sweet memories of a broken love,
memories of your smile, your purity, and your love for me,
they keep me alive with the memory of you,
but they can only feed a dying heart for so long,
till it dies alone. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 22 [informant] => LonelyDork [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Dying Heart

Contributed by LonelyDork on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 05:27:46 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Why are you leaving?
is it because soemthing i did or is it simply just me,
if did something then im sorry I didn't mean to harm your,
If I didn't then im still sorry,

What can i do to keep you,to hold you, to love you,
Without your warmth my heart will grow cold,
and i'll cry alone,
but you can't hear this because your already gone...

All that remains are sweet memories of a broken love,
memories of your smile, your purity, and your love for me,
they keep me alive with the memory of you,
but they can only feed a dying heart for so long,
till it dies alone.

Copyright © LonelyDork ... [ 2005-05-21 17:27:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dying Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Fears on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 05:35:52 PM AEST
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differnt and unique but also very well done. I see that this is the only poem that you have written and posted so far so keep postiong so I can keep reading. Very interesting...............yes, it was.

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Re: Dying Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Shishke_Bob on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 06:33:50 PM AEST
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A very sad poem and one that hurts to post in with such memories and feeling to use, pleases dont give up on love you will be able to make it through and with time you will love again. you showd us what its like to lose someone with heart felt words and images do keep it up, I am looking forword to reading more from you. Be well

KaBob

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