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[sid] => 95247
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[aid] => mick
[title] => ROSE PETALS
[time] => 2005-05-21 15:32:03
[hometext] => Today I came across a box of memories. Lay hidden inside was a single red rose
[bodytext] => Rose petals scattered from the past
A treasure box of memories to last
Lotus blossoms reaching the light
A sense of clarity feelings contrite
Feeling his presence she is aware
Of a sweet aroma drifting through air
Petals fall but memories wont fade
A single tear a single rose displayed
Each petal is worth its weight in gold
To have and to hold a lovers tale told
Angels tread where lovers once dared
Petals of love that once was shared
[comments] => 14
[counter] => 274
[topic] => 22
[informant] => sweetangeluk
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[score] => 57
[ratings] => 12
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => LostLove
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ROSE PETALS
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sweetangeluk
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Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 03:32:03 PM in AEST
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Rose petals scattered from the past
A treasure box of memories to last
Lotus blossoms reaching the light
A sense of clarity feelings contrite
Feeling his presence she is aware
Of a sweet aroma drifting through air
Petals fall but memories wont fade
A single tear a single rose displayed
Each petal is worth its weight in gold
To have and to hold a lovers tale told
Angels tread where lovers once dared
Petals of love that once was shared
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Re: ROSE PETALS
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 04:01:09 PM AEST
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| Oh this is really beautiful, and tugged at my heartstrings! You spoke volumes in such few words...Very well done. Scorp. |
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Re: ROSE PETALS
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 05:13:32 PM AEST
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Soft and beautiful, but oh so sad my friend. Those old memories always seem to haunt us dont they?
Very well written
Roses
Larry |
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Re: ROSE PETALS
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by emystar on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 06:55:21 PM AEST
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You certainly created a masterpeice here!
What else can I say except there isnot many out there that can top this one.
U go NOoooowwwwwwwww.
luv, huggs, smiles, rose petels 2 u,
emy |
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Re: ROSE PETALS
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:27:20 AM AEST
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This was like dreaming and i couldn't wake up, then again, maybey i didn't want 2, very
beautiful . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: ROSE PETALS
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 01:38:52 AM AEST
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This was really pretty. An amazing write full of love and tenderness.
A well written piece. Hope to see more soon.
Jane xxx |
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Re: ROSE PETALS
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by bernard on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 01:14:53 AM AEST
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| Absolutely lovely full marks for this exquisite love poem. Hugs and Love from bernard. |
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Re: ROSE PETALS
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 08:36:46 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful write, Bought back memories of when I bought an ex partner a plastic rose for valentines day, she went ****ing mental!
Johnny. |
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Re: ROSE PETALS
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 12:56:47 PM AEST
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Short and sweet, perhaps like the life of a rose itself.
Good work
Steve |
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Re: ROSE PETALS
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 01:06:52 PM AEST
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WOW!! This is such a precious write.... Just as the memories are, I'm sure... Thank you for sharing this...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: ROSE PETALS
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 04:28:30 PM AEST
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Memories of endearing!!This was absolutely beautiful.........I remember finding one red rose in my teasure of books. It was from my oldest daughter who graduated cum laude
and she came over during the ceremony and gave me a rose.....and said, "Mom, Dad would be so proud of you for the way you raised we kids!" Of course I cried right there in front of God and everyone else!
Your depiction of memories will be one I shall never forget
Beautiful work I give you a 5 hands down!
Warm love
consue
And thank you too for all you wonderful comments
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Re: ROSE PETALS
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by bernard on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:18:33 AM AEST
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| The petals of a single Rose hold sometimes a lifetime of love, Keep your Rose Petals safe my dear they are one of lifes great treasures. Love and best wishes to you and the young mother from bernard. |
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Re: ROSE PETALS
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 05:43:09 PM AEST
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truely beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: ROSE PETALS
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by Archie on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 08:59:22 PM AEST
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| You captured the memory well in your verse and the reminder of past love shone throughout your poem. |
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Re: ROSE PETALS
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 02:35:13 AM AEST
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Absolutely wonderful - a treasure box of memories. Too often in moments of anger, we tend to throw such treasures from the past away. I have very little left from my ex, but now I wish I did to hand down to my daughter.
Excellent write! |
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