Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 17:50:16 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 95245 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Daddy When... [time] => 2005-05-21 14:37:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Daddy When You Come Home,
You’re Always Drunk,
You Fall Asleep On Your Chair,
And I Have To Look After Your Son.

Daddy When You Are Home,
You Don’t Talk To Me,
You Are Too Drunk To Talk,
Why Are You Doing This Daddy?!

Daddy When You Are Sober,
I Don’t See Much Of You,
I Know Mommy Left You Daddy,
But I’m Here For You.

Daddy When We Went,
I Saw The Pain In Your Eyes,
It Hurt Me So Much,
I Felt So Bad Inside!

Daddy When I Went, I Felt Bad,
But You Really Really Hurt Us,
Daddy, I Am Back Now,
But Daddy You Are Still So Anxious!

Daddy, When My Sister Hit Me,
You Said “Give It A Chance Hayley”
I Did Daddy,
But She Was Hit Me So Violently.

Daddy, When She Hit Me,
I Had Scratches Over My Body Daddy,
She Went To Hit Me Again,
But I Stopped Her Daddy!

Daddy, When That Night Came,
I Couldn’t Take It Anymore,
Mommy Didn’t Know What Was Going On,
As It Was All Behind A Closed Door.



Daddy When I Rang You,
You Asked To Speak To Mom,
She Seemed Puzzled,
Because She Didn’t Know What Was Going On.

Daddy When You Picked Me Up,
I Cried For Ages In The Car,
You Gave Me A Hug Daddy,
And For That You Are A Star!!

Daddy When I Came Home,
Things Were The Same,
I Got In There,
And To The Door, Nanny Came.

Daddy When 3 Weeks Passed,
We Are Back To Square One,
Daddy You’re Drinking Again,
It Is Time To Take Some Action.

Daddy When You Turned To Drink,
Things Changed,
You Cant See It,
But Your Mom And I Have Exchanged
Thoughts.

Daddy When You Fall Asleep,
When You Have Drank Too Much,
Nanny And I Talk,
We Want You To Retouch.

Daddy When You Breath Heavy,
I Think You Are Not Going To Breathe,
Daddy, What Is With The Drinking?
Well At Least You Don’t Seethe!

Daddy, Im Going To Help You,
I’m Going To Do Whatever I Can,
It Is Destroying All Of Us,
But Daddy I Do Have A Plan!!!
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 48 [informant] => BuggY [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Daddy When...

Contributed by BuggY on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 02:37:30 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Daddy When You Come Home,
You’re Always Drunk,
You Fall Asleep On Your Chair,
And I Have To Look After Your Son.

Daddy When You Are Home,
You Don’t Talk To Me,
You Are Too Drunk To Talk,
Why Are You Doing This Daddy?!

Daddy When You Are Sober,
I Don’t See Much Of You,
I Know Mommy Left You Daddy,
But I’m Here For You.

Daddy When We Went,
I Saw The Pain In Your Eyes,
It Hurt Me So Much,
I Felt So Bad Inside!

Daddy When I Went, I Felt Bad,
But You Really Really Hurt Us,
Daddy, I Am Back Now,
But Daddy You Are Still So Anxious!

Daddy, When My Sister Hit Me,
You Said “Give It A Chance Hayley”
I Did Daddy,
But She Was Hit Me So Violently.

Daddy, When She Hit Me,
I Had Scratches Over My Body Daddy,
She Went To Hit Me Again,
But I Stopped Her Daddy!

Daddy, When That Night Came,
I Couldn’t Take It Anymore,
Mommy Didn’t Know What Was Going On,
As It Was All Behind A Closed Door.



Daddy When I Rang You,
You Asked To Speak To Mom,
She Seemed Puzzled,
Because She Didn’t Know What Was Going On.

Daddy When You Picked Me Up,
I Cried For Ages In The Car,
You Gave Me A Hug Daddy,
And For That You Are A Star!!

Daddy When I Came Home,
Things Were The Same,
I Got In There,
And To The Door, Nanny Came.

Daddy When 3 Weeks Passed,
We Are Back To Square One,
Daddy You’re Drinking Again,
It Is Time To Take Some Action.

Daddy When You Turned To Drink,
Things Changed,
You Cant See It,
But Your Mom And I Have Exchanged
Thoughts.

Daddy When You Fall Asleep,
When You Have Drank Too Much,
Nanny And I Talk,
We Want You To Retouch.

Daddy When You Breath Heavy,
I Think You Are Not Going To Breathe,
Daddy, What Is With The Drinking?
Well At Least You Don’t Seethe!

Daddy, Im Going To Help You,
I’m Going To Do Whatever I Can,
It Is Destroying All Of Us,
But Daddy I Do Have A Plan!!!




Copyright © BuggY ... [ 2005-05-21 14:37:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Daddy When... (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 04:05:13 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Full of emotion, and I think the repetitiveness
actually works in this poem. I hope you share this poem with him, and I do hope things improve for you.... Scorp.


Re: Daddy When... (User Rating: 1 )
by BuggY on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 04:48:36 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I Dont think i'll share this with him, because i am the type to bottle things up and hope it will all go away. But maybe one day...
Thanks for the comment!!
Hayley-Ree xxx


Re: Daddy When... (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:04:55 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
What a courageous poem. You have showed in this piece, a young persons,willingness to support, stand by and Love this Daddy. Coz by the words you chose, it can been felt and well understood that he needs all the support he can get for himself and the others involved.
Staying strong with the conviction and praying helps . If you believe -he will in time- fix it all.

Whisper




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com