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so they will never be heard
the one that got me in trouble
was a simple ten letter word

To me it was such a small thing
a token of growing affection
never in my wildest dreams
would I think it would lead to rejection

Having left the nest with such glee
and unfurling my wings to fly
aerodynamically I am such a failure
ground rushing up for me to die

Heart breaks in two on impact
this was the way it had to be
because I jumped oh so early
instead of waiting patiently

I'd thought I was ready to soar
amongst the azure with life on the mend
but that ten letter word sent me crashing
because I'd wanted girlfriend
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Jaycee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Ten Letter Word

Contributed by Jaycee on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:45:09 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Some things should never be spoken
so they will never be heard
the one that got me in trouble
was a simple ten letter word

To me it was such a small thing
a token of growing affection
never in my wildest dreams
would I think it would lead to rejection

Having left the nest with such glee
and unfurling my wings to fly
aerodynamically I am such a failure
ground rushing up for me to die

Heart breaks in two on impact
this was the way it had to be
because I jumped oh so early
instead of waiting patiently

I'd thought I was ready to soar
amongst the azure with life on the mend
but that ten letter word sent me crashing
because I'd wanted girlfriend

Copyright © Jaycee ... [ 2005-05-21 10:45:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Ten Letter Word (User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 01:37:26 PM AEST
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so sad, rejection is really hard, and it sucks. :( great poem.

Re: Ten Letter Word (User Rating: 1 )
by GingerB on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 02:25:01 PM AEST
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"To me it was such a small thing
a token of growing affection
never in my wildest dreams
would I think it would lead to rejection"

Ah Jaycee, some things are perceived differently by others. You should not let that phase you.
A word of advice tho. Take it slow and easy and enjoy the friendship.

Ginny

Re: Ten Letter Word (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 03:29:38 PM AEST
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I am so sorry for laughing, but this is so funny and normal. Sorry to say I don't believe it was the word, I think it was the 'me want too fast' that cause the hurt. Hope all is better now.

Peace,
Rita

Re: Ten Letter Word (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:56:34 AM AEST
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this is a wonerfull write..
tasha

Re: Ten Letter Word (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 07:06:07 AM AEST
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Hi: get your heart glue and try agian there must be someone there for you. wait patiently maybe it will come to you . good luck..

Re: Ten Letter Word (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 09:31:37 PM AEST
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u seem to be writing a lot about this kinda stuff lately... i just rilly hope u find someone that can appreciate u and all that you are...
keep hope alive my frend,
jennie*

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