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Array ( [sid] => 95181 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When [time] => 2005-05-20 21:22:19 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Maybe I was foolish
Maybe I was blind
Maybe I was just all wrong

I thought that I knew you
I thought you cared
I thought that you would be different

But now times have changed and I no longer know
Are you in this as much as you say?
I’m getting attached to you
I’m getting afraid
I’m scared I’m gonna get hurt

What do you want fro me?
What do you want me to do?
I feel left out of your world
Like I’m not part of your life
Like you don’t want me to be

You have become distant
You have become different
I am beginning to worry
Will you break my heart??

You have so much going on
Do you really want to deal with a girlfriend too?
You seem as though you don’t want to bother with it
I just don’t want to get in over my head
I don’t want to hurt again

Things have changed
They aren’t how they used to be
I don’t know if I want to stay in this anymore

So much confusion
So much on my mind
Do I listen to my head or my heart?
How much is enough?
When will I know??
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 48 [informant] => fastpitchqt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
When

Contributed by fastpitchqt on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 09:22:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Maybe I was foolish
Maybe I was blind
Maybe I was just all wrong

I thought that I knew you
I thought you cared
I thought that you would be different

But now times have changed and I no longer know
Are you in this as much as you say?
I’m getting attached to you
I’m getting afraid
I’m scared I’m gonna get hurt

What do you want fro me?
What do you want me to do?
I feel left out of your world
Like I’m not part of your life
Like you don’t want me to be

You have become distant
You have become different
I am beginning to worry
Will you break my heart??

You have so much going on
Do you really want to deal with a girlfriend too?
You seem as though you don’t want to bother with it
I just don’t want to get in over my head
I don’t want to hurt again

Things have changed
They aren’t how they used to be
I don’t know if I want to stay in this anymore

So much confusion
So much on my mind
Do I listen to my head or my heart?
How much is enough?
When will I know??




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Re: When (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 07:46:35 PM AEST
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i don't think you'll ever know...well, at least not completely. go for it - whichever one you pick

excellant poem...speaks to the reader...i love it!

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