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Array ( [sid] => 95176 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Should've Never Come Here Alone [time] => 2005-05-20 20:56:58 [hometext] => Inspired by the title's line in a Taking Back Sunday song and the little girl on the Hawthorne Heights CD [bodytext] => Hey there little girl
Little girl, you shouldn't be here alone
Why are you walking down this road?
I could care less where I'm going
Or how we get there -- just keep moving
Little girl, it's dangerous out here
Come closer, come near
Who has pushed you to this path?
Child...tell me of when you last laughed
Come closer, come near
You should've never come here
Little girl, you shouldn't be traveling this alone
You may end up old
You do'nt want this hole in your heart to talk about
So just go back home
...or somewhere near there. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 299 [topic] => 21 [informant] => iluvpencils [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

You Should've Never Come Here Alone

Contributed by iluvpencils on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 08:56:58 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Hey there little girl
Little girl, you shouldn't be here alone
Why are you walking down this road?
I could care less where I'm going
Or how we get there -- just keep moving
Little girl, it's dangerous out here
Come closer, come near
Who has pushed you to this path?
Child...tell me of when you last laughed
Come closer, come near
You should've never come here
Little girl, you shouldn't be traveling this alone
You may end up old
You do'nt want this hole in your heart to talk about
So just go back home
...or somewhere near there.

Copyright © iluvpencils ... [ 2005-05-20 20:56:58]
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Re: You Should've Never Come Here Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Urizen on Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 07:42:35 PM AEST
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Very interesting poem, I liked it, I don't know of the material that inspired you, but I think it doesn't matter as the imagry is strong.

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