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Array ( [sid] => 95156 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Us Together, In the Rain [time] => 2005-05-20 18:46:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The drops of rain start at a sprinkle
Oncoming storm, so beautiful and sureal
The moment I wish to hold forever
As we are together, and we are each others only appeal

The drops of rain begin to grow
Under the clouds, so gloomy and cold
So oddly romantic, kissing in the rain
I could stay here an eternity, and never let go

The drops of rain are now beginning to pour
As we are drenched by the water
We look into each others eyes once more
. . .
We sliped out of our skin
That holds our pain
I will remember it forever
...
Us together in the rain

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Us Together, In the Rain

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 06:46:56 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



The drops of rain start at a sprinkle
Oncoming storm, so beautiful and sureal
The moment I wish to hold forever
As we are together, and we are each others only appeal

The drops of rain begin to grow
Under the clouds, so gloomy and cold
So oddly romantic, kissing in the rain
I could stay here an eternity, and never let go

The drops of rain are now beginning to pour
As we are drenched by the water
We look into each others eyes once more
. . .
We sliped out of our skin
That holds our pain
I will remember it forever
...
Us together in the rain





Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-05-20 18:46:56]
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Re: Us Together, In the Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 08:04:54 PM AEST
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This poem hits home.. its beautiful.. my favorite part is the end
"We sliped out of our skin
That holds our pain
I will remember it forever"
I can relate to this.. keep up the great writin
~~~Michelle~~~


Re: Us Together, In the Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by bethers_is_my_baby on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 08:28:35 PM AEST
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wow, this is so beautiful!!! amazing work!!! i loved it!!!


Re: Us Together, In the Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 09:54:39 PM AEST
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a happy poem....couldnt you have given me some warning? heh. calmness before the storm. i dont really know what to say about this poem clark. it was a good poem, but it was happy, and i just cant identify with it right now, maybe later i will be able to read it better than this. ::goes off to play in a puddle::


Re: Us Together, In the Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by somedaylove on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 02:20:09 PM AEST
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Beautiful write......to so many rain is sadness but to me rain makes me think of good times.....great poem keep it up


Re: Us Together, In the Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 01:24:32 AM AEST
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oh this captivated me heaps even though u showed me it before...but the second time round was even better!!!! lol u did a brilliant job and this made my heart SMILE
u can sure touch a persons romantic side! well done, this is beautiful
ur a great writer


Re: Us Together, In the Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 10:01:57 PM AEST
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Hehe! There's nothing better than that experience : )
All kidding aside, this is a delicately sweet poem. Nicely done Clark.



Scorp.




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