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Array ( [sid] => 95151 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => you made me want to live [time] => 2005-05-20 17:51:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => a love i dont deserve
in a life i dont deserve to live
to repay you for this happiness
theres nothing i can give

cause there nothing in this universe
that could show how greatfull i am
i could spend forever trying
but i dont think that i can

i dont know what to believe anymore
since ive met you ive ben so confused
but however we where brought together
i know that i cant loose you

im different when i am with you
drive me crazy is what you do
if you could only see the real me
then youd know just how much i love you

but there is one thing that i can do
to show you how much i care
to show you how much you mean to me
i can promis to always be there

a love i dont deserve
in a life i dont deserve to live
to repay you for this happiness
ive decided that im goin to live

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 2 [informant] => bethers_is_my_baby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

you made me want to live

Contributed by bethers_is_my_baby on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 05:51:20 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

a love i dont deserve
in a life i dont deserve to live
to repay you for this happiness
theres nothing i can give

cause there nothing in this universe
that could show how greatfull i am
i could spend forever trying
but i dont think that i can

i dont know what to believe anymore
since ive met you ive ben so confused
but however we where brought together
i know that i cant loose you

im different when i am with you
drive me crazy is what you do
if you could only see the real me
then youd know just how much i love you

but there is one thing that i can do
to show you how much i care
to show you how much you mean to me
i can promis to always be there

a love i dont deserve
in a life i dont deserve to live
to repay you for this happiness
ive decided that im goin to live

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato

Copyright Â© bethers_is_my_baby ... [ 2005-05-20 17:51:20]
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Re: you made me want to live (User Rating: 1 )
by emokid on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 07:23:00 PM AEST
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yea but what's the fun in that dying is funner j/k I know what kind of love this is and it only come once in a lifetime great write

Ian the emokid

Re: you made me want to live (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 11:05:54 PM AEST
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Sounds like you've got a nice, loving person in your life! Nice write. One minor suggestion if I may; double check spelling,etc. before you post or let the moderators check for you....
Welcome to YPDC by the way...I look forward to more of your poetry! Scorp.

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